Moon Water

Moon Water

This is my first story. I don't know if it's any good. Just read it. I don't care how terrible it is.

published on June 28, 2013not completed

The Plan

The Plan The next evening, I ran down to the lake and found Raven, Cheshire, Luke, and Cloe sitting in a circle talking.
"So Julie, what is this "PLAN"' asked Raven sarcastically.
"Well, it might sound stupid, but I think that we should try to reverse our powers and bring back the moon." I said, and stared at everyone for feedback.
"You mean erase all that hard work? Julie, you have got to be kidding!" said Luke, smacking his head.
"Stupidest plan ever." said Raven.
"I-I think it's it's a good idea." Cloe stuttered.
"Huh?'' asked everyone.
"You see, we got rid of the werewolves, but we also got rid of other stuff too. Like moon craters, waves, surfing, and the study of the moon. People, we have got to do what's right. And fight the werewolves. We will find a way to destroy them. I just know it." And Cloe bowed when she was finished with her speech. Cheshire started to clap. Then I clapped. Cloe never does stuff like that. And finally, Raven.
"Wait! I know how to stop the werewolves! You know how we destroyed the whole moon? What if, we just brought back part of it, so that the moon will never be full!" I yelled.
"Shh! Do you want people to hear us?" asked Raven angirly.
"SORRY!" I screamed.
"BE QUIET OR EVERYBODY IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD WILL HERE ABOUT OUR SECRET PLAN AND HOW WE CAN CONTROL WATER AND HOW WE DESTROYED THE STUPID DUMB OLD MOON!" Screamed Cheshire so loud, that the wind stopped blowing for a second.
"Oh, god, please say no one heard that." mumbled Luke and Raven with their heads in their hands.
"Cheshire!" I whispered.
"SORRY!!!!!" he yelled.
"STOP YELLING!" I yell-whispered.
"I AM NOT YELLING! I AM SCREAMING AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS!!!!" screamed Cheshire at the top of his lungs.
"Someone is  gonna to hear us." said Cloe, who was unusually quiet.
"And that someone already did." said a creepy voice from behind the tree.
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AHAHAHAH DOOLILY!!!! *ahem* :"> Anyway, awesome story!!!! please continue!!!!
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on June 16, 2014
I got my pics from google. I don't have an iPad. I have an iPod touch. Sorry if you thought I did then it was just a typo.
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on August 18, 2013
I really like them, where did u get ur pictures from and do u actually have an iPad, if u do can I ask u some questions
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on August 17, 2013
Whatever. I just write what comes to my head. I didn't want it to have a preamble. The preamble is in the middle of the first chapter. So yeah, whatever.:)
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on July 15, 2013
Very nice story, but it had absolutely no preamble.
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on July 15, 2013
I just looked them up on google. All the pictures I am gonna use are in my photos
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on June 29, 2013
I also love the pictures you use where did you find them?
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on June 28, 2013
Thanks. ;)
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on June 28, 2013
I really like it so far!:)
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on June 28, 2013