SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

Featuring guest stars Katniss and Peeta Mellark. This is as if they rebels had lost the war, and the Games continued. And as punishment, Katniss and Peeta have to mentor every D. 12 tribute. It is the 4th Quarter Quell and there is a *special* change to excite the Capitol people... This is about a 12 year old trying to outsmart the Game Makers and stay alive...

published on November 28, 2012not completed

Backpack, First Night, and Careers

In the back pack, I find a small, cheap compass that hooks onto the belt loop of my pants. I curse and wish I'd opened this earlier so I'd know if I had been heading straight in the woods, or if I had gradually turned, doing a huge arc and actually being closer to the Cornucopia. I continue to pull out objects. A small canteen that could only fit a few large gulps of water at a time. A small straw like-object with a 8 darts. I guess that they are poisonous, so I quickly put them down to avoid hurting myself. Then I pull out the last object that was stuffed at the very bottom. Personally it's my favorite. It a black, fleece blacket. It's not a jacket, which would be better if I had to run, but it's perfect for now. Super warm and will hide the small bits of skin that is showing through the dirt well. I set it to the side and begin digging more. I finally dig a hole about two feet deep, two feet wide, and two feet long. As small as I can squeeze into, to conserve heat. Then I grab the blanket and wrap it around me. I'm so small that if I lay in a fetal position, the blanket covers me all the way around from head to toe. I'm so lucky. Most of the tributes are either dead or cold. Much worse than me. I am hungry though. But I push it to the side to deal with in the morning. I drift to sleep.

But, when I finally wake up, I'm not worried about starving. I am alert and scared. I hear a twigs snapping and a group of people talking. They don't seem scared, Careers I bet. I peek around from the bottom of the bush by the ground, where most people wouldn't notice a few leaves move. What I see shocks and scares me more than finding Careers. What I see is the other District kids. Districts 6-11. Not all of them, but I can tell none of them are the original Careers. It's a group of about 6, each holding a dangerous weapon, cheering, talking. Acting as a team, like they own the place. 'What happened to the real Careers,' I wonder. But I don't go out. I don't join them. It doesn't matter who they are. What districts they are from. Those people, no, those *kids* are the Careers. I can't trust them, I tell myself. No. They'd kill me. Trick me. I don't know. Maybe they'd accept me? No, I can't bank my life on a 'maybe'.

They soon leave. I don't dare strike them with one of my darts. I'm too outnumbered. One of them would see where it came from, and another would chop my cover down with a sword or machete, and violently end me. So I wait them out, and they finally leave. I get out and stretch my cramped legs and look for a way to get food.
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You have the right idea and very clever quarter quell idea! Although, I think you need to slow down, describe the sourrounding a little more, a bit more dialoge, more characters, and I would like to be able to get to know Aspen a bit more :) if you added these things I think it would be very exciting!! Also, I hope this doesn't offend you in any way!! That's See More
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on June 20, 2013
i don't know how to finish it. @.@
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on April 05, 2013
Ausome it just needs to be finished
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on February 02, 2013
@Charlie-... 8( Was it bad and just needs to hurry up and be done?!? Or as in it's good and you want to read it.. ??
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on January 01, 2013
PLZ FINISH SOOn!!!
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on December 26, 2012
:D thnx!
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on December 08, 2012
I just have to say...again...that this is an AWESOME story!! Can't wait for the rest!!:)
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on December 08, 2012
:3 yay!! I love it when my stuff is loveable! haha!! I all ready have the beginning of the actual Game beginning planned out :D
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on December 06, 2012
@Leigh07 Yes, I did!
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on December 05, 2012
This is good!!
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on December 04, 2012
Thank you, I tried to make it shorter than my last one, did you like the Quarter Quell surprise??
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on November 29, 2012
Awesome remake!:)
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on November 29, 2012