SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

Featuring guest stars Katniss and Peeta Mellark. This is as if they rebels had lost the war, and the Games continued. And as punishment, Katniss and Peeta have to mentor every D. 12 tribute. It is the 4th Quarter Quell and there is a special change to excite the Capitol people... This is about a 12 year old trying to outsmart the Game Makers and stay alive...

Nobody.07 published on November 28, 2012not completed

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I stretch out and throw the bag with my  canteen and blanket in it. I keep the straw and darts in my pocket and compass in hand. I take off at a jog heading away from where the tributes from earlier went. I turn so that I think I'm heading back to the Cornucopia. I jog for forever it seems, but I suddenly freeze, leaping behind a tree as I hear a loud yelling.
    "Stop!" a girl screams.
    "You have to clean it, it'll get infected.!" A boy yells back.
    "It hurts!" This girl yells out.
    "Damn it, I don't care!" This boy's voice yells. She suddenly yells out and begins to cry and sob.
I take a deep breath and peek around the tree. A girl sits on the ground, clutching her leg, tears pouring from her eyes.

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Nobody.07 Inquisitive Luck published on November 28, 2012

17 quizzes 10 stories 27 questions 3 pages

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Idiot_Killjoy

You have the right idea and very clever quarter quell idea! Although, I think you need to slow down, describe the sourrounding a little more, a bit more dialoge, more characters, and I would like to be able to get to know Aspen a bit more :) if you added these things I think it would be very exciting!! Also, I hope this doesn't offend you in any way!! That's See More