My little pony:new friendship

My little pony:new friendship

This story is about 6 mare's who just got to Ponyville.They are speciall,but they don't know it.It's a story that i am creator in qoutev.

published on May 03, 2013not completed

Chapter 1

Chapter 1 *Sweetheart's P.O.V.*

I'm walking to my school.It was a nice day outside in Canterlot.I saw to ponies fighting.I wanted to put a love spell on them,but......Celestia said that i still should wait till i get full control.So i did it the old fashion way.I walked near those to ponies.It was a little fillie and a  little colt.
-Hello there,youngsters.You really shouldn't fight.It's bad for you,-i said.
-Why?Why it's bad for me?-the colt asked.
He got me on that.But i showed him how smart i am.
-I meant that it's not bad it's great.Thats the first step on having a crush.
-What?-the colt asked again.
-Didn't you know if you fight with somepony.Especially a mare she could start having a crush on you.
-No way!I don't even like her.Bye Stella!-he said a ran away.
I giggled.I went to school and i met Princess Celestia.
-Why hello there,dearest teacher,-i said with joy.
-Hello,Swetie.I need to tell you something.You are my greatest student,but i have to sent yoy away to learn with another teacher.Her name is Princess Twilight Sparkle.She is very talented and i know you will get well with her.
-I'm not going to learn with you......But....,-I whimped.
-It's going to be fine.She is pretty friendly.
I didn't listen to her just walked to the classroom.

*Stormy's P.O.V.*

-Mom!I'm not going to Ponyville!It stinks!-I said.-And besides where am i going to live.
-I found a really gentle pony.Her name is Rarity.You can FIX yourself with her,-mom said.
What did she mean by saying fix.Am i something that went wrong?Was i a mistake?

*Light Splash'es P.O.V.*

-RD is sooooooooooooooo awesome i need to be with blablablabla,-i said.
-I had enough,-mom whispered.-STOP IT LIGHTY!!!!!!
I froze.Was she seriuos?
-Thats enough.Pack your stuff,-she said.
-Wh-where will you sent me?-i asked.
-To Ponyville.I had enough with your talking.Rainbow dash that,Oh no!I totally forgot to say that RD that.Somepony else could listen to your crumbling.I had enough.And by the way.Rainbow Dash always hangs out there.Mayne you have the ''Luck'' to met her.
She was serious.But look at the bright side.Rainbow dash does hang out there.And maybe i'l have the luck.

*Penny's P.O.V.*

-Penny!I heard you we're god in school so i senting you to Ponyville.I heard the school there was for hardworkers,-my mom said.
-That's wonderfull,-i cried.
I'm just an earth pony and i'm best at school.Awesome.

*Pear's P.O.V.*

I'm packing my stuff becouse i'm going to Ponyville.My sister came in to my room.
-Hi,peargirl.I hope you'll wont forget to pack your pears becouse you got so many.I just think you'll have enough room in your backpack for pears,-she loughed.
''Wimp'' i whispered.God thing she didn't hear me becouse she would of beat me up till i die.

*Birsty's P.O.V.*

I came back from school.My eyes we're filled up with tears.Then my mommy came in.
-Birsty,i can't stand seeing you like this.You're crying everyday(ecsept when you meet your friends).I'm senting you to Ponyville.Maybe everything will change there.
-Oh!Thankyouthankyouthankyou.I couldn't stand it either,-said with a smile.
I ran in my room to pack my stuff.

My P.O.V. :D

I hope ya'll enjoy'd it.Comment for chapter 2.Follow for more fun.Bye.
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So many spelling mistakes
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on February 10, 2014
make more please is so good
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on August 07, 2013
Really?You think it's awesome?Than i go make more.
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Make more I need to know what happens. But you probably shudve let scootaloo become RD student
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on June 12, 2014
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on May 05, 2013
awesome story!! pweeze make more
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on May 05, 2013