the murder on 16th street!

the murder on 16th street!

14 year old diane soyer thinks that key west is the most boring place ever! so do the other kids that live on 16 street but when a suspicious man comes into town and mrs and mr haze are murdered everything changes and its up to diane and a few of her friends to find out who murdered mrs and mr haze

published on April 27, 2013not completed

letter to julia!

dear julia...... im in the car and its super boring! so far we are in  kuntucky and its really nice there! i wish we where moving here :)                 

                                                     i wish you were here too :( its gonna be hard without you around but im doing like i promised and im writing to you! i have another thing we can do too! we can face chat! it will all work out i swear omg im starting to dound like my mom! *shiver* so how is it in ohio i know i have only been  gone for like 10 minutes but how is it i miss ohio already! i hope you can come to key west with me someday or i could come to  ohio! we  are  here at the kuntucky airport so i got to go im sorry bye!  










                              p.s write me back!
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
3.9
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 8 users

Comments (12)

Yes yes I do and thanks :)
reply
About Author
Report
on February 03, 2014
YAY love it more please!!!
reply
About Author
Report
on November 13, 2013
ooh i LOVE it it's great!!!! :)
reply
About Author
Report
on November 13, 2013
thanks
reply
About Author
Report
on June 03, 2013
good job
reply
About Author
Report
on June 03, 2013
thanks :)
reply
About Author
Report
on May 02, 2013
OMG GREAT BOOK
reply
About Author
Report
on May 02, 2013
thanks! im working on that
reply
About Author
Report
on April 28, 2013
Its great but you need to check your punctuation, capitals, and quotation marks. Otherwise, this story is awesome!!!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 28, 2013
ok thanks :)
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2013
continue
when someone is talking use "this" to know what they are saying
i love it
#lovin it
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2013
hope you like it!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2013