the murder on 16th street!

the murder on 16th street!

14 year old diane soyer thinks that key west is the most boring place ever! so do the other kids that live on 16 street but when a suspicious man comes into town and mrs and mr haze are murdered everything changes and its up to diane and a few of her friends to find out who murdered mrs and mr haze

published on April 27, 2013not completed

to key west

today is the day i cant belive we are really moving im so sad but im happy i finally get to go to key west i have heard its super nice there                  
im going to start school at a school called sherwood i wonder if there are a lot of kids my age? at that second my thoughts where interupted by mrs soyer honey! hurry up and pack your bags!we leave in ten minutes!        

ok mom i need to call julia first i said

                                                                      *phone call*.................................
                                                                        julia-hello?
                                                                      me-hey julia i called to say goodbye                 
                                                                     julia-oh                  
                                                                      me-dont be sad ill write and call you when ever i get the chance   
                                                                     julia-ok bye diane ill miss you i wont ever forget you
                                                                        me- i wont ever forget you too bye
                                                                                *end of phone call*

                                                                              diane! we are gonna miss  our plane get your butt down here!mrs soyer said      
                                                          im coming i said running down the stairs with my stuff in my hands   
                                                                                  hey wheres dad i said dad has a different plane said mrs soyer                                   
                                                                                              *car ride*
                                                                                     ugh! this is so boring! mommm! how much longer?!? i complained
                                                                                       2 hours and 54 mins said mrs soyer       what!!! i said                 
  why dont you write a letter to julia she said     ok thanks mom! i said       *this part is to be continued after the letter!*
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Yes yes I do and thanks :)
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on February 03, 2014
YAY love it more please!!!
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on November 13, 2013
ooh i LOVE it it's great!!!! :)
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on November 13, 2013
thanks
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on June 03, 2013
good job
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on June 03, 2013
thanks :)
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on May 02, 2013
OMG GREAT BOOK
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on May 02, 2013
thanks! im working on that
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on April 28, 2013
Its great but you need to check your punctuation, capitals, and quotation marks. Otherwise, this story is awesome!!!
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on April 28, 2013
ok thanks :)
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on April 27, 2013
continue
when someone is talking use "this" to know what they are saying
i love it
#lovin it
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on April 27, 2013
hope you like it!
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on April 27, 2013