Slave

Slave

Casey is sold and bought. Enjoy please! I hope you enjoy please read. Give some advice

published on April 11, 2013completed

School

School Hi thanks for reading all this, I hope it's all right plz comment! I dont exactly write nice things do I?

I wake in the morning to find a pile of uniform beside me. I put it on and feel the brush of my bracelet. Jace comes in and wraps his arms around me. I look up and see his lovely eyes. I hate loving him but I seem to not be able to hate him. He drags me down stairs with a firm grip making sure I have no where to go. My food is on the floor near the dining room. He shackles my legs up and goes to his kitchen. I eat realizing I havnt eaten for a while. Once I have finished he unshackles me and holds onto me. His sister and brother are here. His brother is about the same age with a girl who I think is like me. His sister is about two years younger than him but with no one with her. I hear a beep and Jace pushes me forward. I see a swish car and he puts me in. A boy is in the front with who I suupose is his mum
"Hey buddy," says Jace
"Hey jace, is that your adopted sister?"He mentions
"Yeah, Jack. she came to us at the beginning of the holidays."
"Cool, what year are you in?" He askes me. I know I have been put down a year so I am not behind the work but my old home actually kept me educated so I was worth more.
"Year 9," I replied
We arrived at the school and saw tons of people there. I got out and Jack pointed me in the direction of the reception. I went in and they lady at the desk asked "New?"
I nodded "Well heres a timetable and map."
I looked quickly at it and left. English first. I felt the painful sqeeze of the bracelet. Why was he tracking me? I walked towards the building and entered. I slipped into a chair and the lesoon started. He introdced himself as Mr O'flannnergon. He was nice enough, the lesoon was ok I supose just not hard. The next I had Physics with Mr Clarn and I met these girls who I think are my friends but they dont really know who I am.

Lunch

I feel the tight squeeze of my bracelet and stand still knowing he is looking for me. I go into the library and stare around. That minute Jace comes in and drags me to the lunch queue. "You're dont have any food,"He wispers. I wish I could because the smell of food is so nice. I follow him while he gets his food and sit down. His friends surrond him and ignore me. Jack comes and sits by me. "No food?" He asks
"Not hungry," I reply. Then I hear come on from Jace
"Better go" I say to Jack. The end of the day comes soon enough. When we get home he shoves me in my cramped room with a small light and some pencils to do homework. I do it quickly cause I was always a good writer. It was an essay for english and I think it is pretty good. Jace comes in and sits next to me. I wonder what he is doing and he just looks at the wall. He turns to me and I jerk away.
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Interesting story...
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on August 12, 2014
One of the best!
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on June 18, 2014
AWESOME
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on June 17, 2014
Congratulations! Your story, Slave, has been posted onto the Nominated Stories page! Well done, Thehost!
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on June 15, 2014
Nice story
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on April 25, 2014
love, love, love it write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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on November 26, 2013
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on November 23, 2013
I'm auseome!
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on November 05, 2013
YAAY! MORE MORE!
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on November 04, 2013
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! PLZS!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZS!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZS!!!!!!!!!!!:D IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
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on October 23, 2013
Wait for it, wait for it...., AAHHHHH!!!!! THIS IS SUCH AN AWESUM STORY!!!!! More, more,more!
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on July 30, 2013
:( great story dude
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on June 21, 2013
What does it mean when it says what year are you in?
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on June 15, 2013
I really really like it!!!!!!! LIKE REALLY LIKE IT!!!!
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on June 15, 2013
OMG good story!!!! Lots of spelling mistakes though. It's ok it's really interesting!!!! :D
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on June 15, 2013
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on June 14, 2013
I read it in four minutes. I was amazed! This isn't exactly qfeast normal, but I like it. If you write about the escape I will favorite!
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on May 27, 2013
thats ok
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on May 23, 2013
Well, its very similar but nevermind that. I'm sorry. Your story was EXCELENT and I really enjoyed reading it. You are an AWESOME author and I apologize :) awesome story.
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on May 22, 2013
Is there?
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on May 22, 2013
-_- there's another story just like this...-_-
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on May 20, 2013
This is a really amazing story!
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on May 10, 2013
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on May 08, 2013
im doing anouther book like it
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on May 08, 2013
awwwww................ its over? i love this story! it was awesome please tell me you're going to add more. this is awesome
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on May 06, 2013
kool love it
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on April 14, 2013
Please write more
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on April 13, 2013
Great story
Your an amazing writer. (:
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on April 13, 2013
Ok thx
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on April 12, 2013
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