Bloody Mary

Bloody Mary

I dare you to read on a spine chilling thriller of the real story of bloody mary Watch out for bloody mary returns which is MUCH scarier

published on April 07, 2013not completed

Death

The townsmen grabbed their guns and their pitchforks and ran toward the witch. When she heard the commotion, Bloody Mary broke off her spell and fled back into the woods. The far-sighted farmer had loaded his gun with silver bullets in case the witch ever came after his daughter. Now he took aim and shot at her. The bullet hit Bloody Mary in the hip and she fell to the ground. The angry townsmen leapt upon her and carried her back into the field, where they built a huge bonfire and burned her at the stake.
As she burned, Bloody Mary screamed a curse at the villagers. If anyone mentioned her name aloud before a mirror, she would send her spirit to revenge herself upon them for her terrible death. When she was dead, the villagers went to the house in the wood and found the unmarked graves of the little girls the evil witch had murdered. She had used their blood to make her young again.
From that day to this, anyone foolish enough to chant Bloody Mary's name three times before a darkened mirror will summon the vengeful spirit of the witch. It is said that she will tear their bodies to pieces and rip their souls from their mutilated bodies. The souls of these unfortunate ones will burn in torment as Bloody Mary once was burned, and they will be trapped forever in the mirror.
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I liked it is was scary will a littel
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on September 09, 2016
cool story;)
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on July 12, 2016
I mean I kno ppl dnt believe it doesn't mean it aint a good story
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on October 26, 2013
and u ummm don't hav 2 be so rude about it right?
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on October 26, 2013
um..... u people dont actually believe in this crap, right??
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on October 26, 2013
hahhahaha lol ur luky ı dnt belıeve ın ıt uva wıse ıd be screamın lol xxxx:p
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on July 25, 2013
hey my names mary! :oD
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on July 22, 2013
welcome hope I helped sorry im useless at dis stuff xxx
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on July 22, 2013
okay thanks
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on July 22, 2013
ok so basically log on search for qfeast and send a message to as many of dere accounts as possible xx hope I helped xx
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on July 22, 2013
Oh actually i have a fake id so how am i suppose to ask
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on July 21, 2013
SUGAR! erhhh soz Jamie im bummed for ideas y don't u quickly make 1 wiv a fake name ask den deactivate it? xxx
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on July 21, 2013
I had an fb acc but now i deactivated it!
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on July 21, 2013
hmmm seems like they've put down the help page I dunno why... do u have facebook? if u do go on qfeast quizzes add them or send dem a help message and they'll answer xxxx
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on July 21, 2013
yes plzz!!
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on July 21, 2013
mmmm not sure what's that about why don't you send a email to qfeast support shoulda giv u the email ? xxxx
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on July 20, 2013
i would but qfeast keeps saying plzzz activate ur acc by the email sent to your email acc but i never got any
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on July 20, 2013
@jamie tell me about it message to everyone read my new storie seperated xx
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on July 20, 2013
These things are stupid but fun
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on July 18, 2013
@Jamie ikr xx
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on July 18, 2013
@owl361 ikr itz stupid n a myth but because its at night ppl are 2 scared 2 try it hhahah :) xx
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on July 18, 2013
I've tried it 2 years before and more than one time! Nothing happened to me!!
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on July 16, 2013
thnleur xx
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on April 30, 2013
Creepy...
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on April 23, 2013
@icecat IKR i havent done it buh my mates are stupid enough2 believe itz real :P :/xx
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on April 19, 2013
In kindergarten i tried bloody mary because no one else would and i figured out that it is not real. :/
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on April 19, 2013
@everygirl2012 I understand but these are ment to be short stories I am not really ready for long stories yet but when i am i will ditto take ur advice thnx bbe xx
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on April 07, 2013
@beauty784 hahhaha lol u neva know the powers of the unknown ;) xx
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on April 07, 2013
*too successful* it was a typo, sorry guys.
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on April 07, 2013
I wouldn't exactly describe it as scary, but you have a great imagination, and to engage the reader, you need to make it more interesting, maybe add some more chapters, and cut out some of it, you need to get some action in, and maybe speech, instead of just one big introduction, and sure, there were a few punctuation mistakes, but other than that, your doing See More
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on April 07, 2013
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