The Little Girl in the Red Cape

The Little Girl in the Red Cape

One night. Loads of things could happen. If only she knew. I dare you to read on

published on April 06, 2013completed

Death

After slowly descending down the stairs, she opened the freezer with shaky arms.
Daring to peek out of the window, she closed her eyes before staring out it.
The same little girl, in the same red cape, holding the same knife was there. Only the knife now had blood on it.

Running up the stairs, scared of what might await, she checked on Holly.
Holly was dead, a small pool of blood forming on the floor under her.
She ran into the bathroom and locked the door behind her before dialing 911.
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Fab story, really freaky:D
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on July 12, 2016
ok done 1 more comin up :)
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on October 31, 2013
i want u 2 chica!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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on October 31, 2013
haha potterpoz not sure if I shud no1 else wnts me 2 xxx
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on October 01, 2013
continue this!!
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on September 29, 2013
@beauty784 no da grl was behınd her xx
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on July 28, 2013
thnx fleur u 2 xx :) xx
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on July 18, 2013
Gosh, you seem so sweet!!!
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on July 18, 2013
thnx hunny xx
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on June 22, 2013
I've heard this story before but this was told better
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on June 03, 2013
lol fleur xx
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on April 30, 2013
Oh-my *Shocked face*!
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on April 24, 2013
@Bmac99 thnx hun will work on it x
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on April 06, 2013
@beauty784 yesh babe you were right xx
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on April 06, 2013
I love the twist at the end! If you want to enhance the scariness, let the pressure build up. Take your time, and it will be 10 times scarier
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on April 06, 2013
Wow this is scary. The babysitter is the killer?
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on April 06, 2013
thnx b xx
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on April 06, 2013
Sc-c-c-ary! :)
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on April 06, 2013
Comment what you think the ending means xxx
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on April 06, 2013