May The Odds Ever Be In Your Favor!

May The Odds Ever Be In Your Favor!

"May the 42nd annual Hunger Games begin!" Ceasar Flickerman's voice is drowned out by the Capitol's crazy cheers. But I can't hear them. I can only hear blood rushing to my head. My heart pounding through my uniform. All I see, is the giant, digital clock counting down from 60 seconds. The gleaming Cornicopia luring tributes in to be murdered with its precious foods and weapons...

published on November 14, 2012not completed

The Unlucky District 7 Boy

Christilleny calls into the microphone after her bony fingers finally "Jaezene McPhilum? Please come up young man!"

My heart pummeled through my stomach, through my feet. It threw itself threw the stage's floor boards, and buried itself into the cold ground.

A boy, 16 years old maybe, slowly pushed his way through the throng of other boys looking for "Jaezene."  Why the only boy, outside of our family, that Luke cared about the most? Jaeze had a family similar to us. Jaeze always worked with Luke, covered for him when Luke couldn't be there, he was small for his age, and picked on. That was why Luke got into Out of School Suspension in 7th grade. Because Jaeze was quiet, didn't stick up for himself when the guys would start to beat the crap out of him. Wouldn't even throw a punch back. Would just sit there and take it. Over and over again. One time, Luke sneeked up behind one of the bullies, and put him in a vicious headlock. Luke held him so tight, that from where I was, half a block away, I could see the boy's skin turning pale, then red, then purplish. The other bullies quickly backed off of Jaeze. Luke brought Jaeze to our home, and I fixed him up. Luke almost never gets mad like that. But when he gets ticked, somebody is gonna regret getting him irritated. After that, Luke hung out with Jaeze more, and the bullies never really messed with Jaeze too much after that. They became as close as brothers. Luke even taught Jaeze to fight, and a couple of survival tips. But nothing that could help him against bloodthirsty Game Makers, Capital people, mutts, and Careers.

I swore, the reaping was sometimes rigged. I just didn't know how they would know Jaden would volunteer for Makaly, I would volunteer for Jaden. Or that Luke would volunteer for Jaeze, leaving the Twin's and Selinna alone.

"I'm right here," Jaeze called. He had chocolate brown hair, It was shaggy, and it fell over his eyebrows until it flicked out forward a little bit. His eyes were nearly black, though. His hair implied a cute, nice boy. His eyes foretold of a hidden killer on the inside, waiting to be set loose. They were dark, cold, suspicious. Always flitting from one face to another.

"No! Please! Jaeze, no, you can't!" Luke let go of Jaden. She jumped, scared; he hardly ever yelled.

"Luke, you'd better sit down, right now, and let me handle this." Jaeze said quietly, yet stern.

"But- your family!" Luke called out.

"And what about yours, Luke? It's you, Selinna, and the Twins. Do you honestly think I'd let you take my place? Whatever." (he didn't mention my name. Either so that the whole district wouldn't feel pity for the family, or to prove to Luke that I could easily be dead in a matter of weeks.)

Luke sank back. The words were harsh, and Luke had always had a large pride. I was shocked, I knew Jaeze to be pretty silent. Luke opened his mouth again.

"Luke, just knock it off, okay? He's got this." I pulled Christilleny's head closer to me and I spoke into the headphone.

Christilleny pushed me off of her, as if I was grub. She called out "Well, this has been wonderful!" As Jaeze came to stand next to me. He didn't catch my eyes.
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Will you please write more? This is so good!
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on May 29, 2014
Not a District, an Arena :) Thank you! @owlette, fleur, IceCat ... I've been working on my writing a ton lately, and could probably redo this... again. >.> Might. Not really ambitious.
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on December 26, 2013
what dstrict is this set in :) great story btw :-B
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on December 21, 2013
LOVE LOVE LOVE
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on June 07, 2013
its an AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
awww...i was to late...i answered your question a few seconds ago....=(
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on April 18, 2013
Really quite amazing.
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on March 22, 2013
THANK YOU GUYS for supporting me <3 it means a ton to me!! I will continue!! But in the meantime, check out my new SHORT hunger games remake with a 12 year old in a QUARTER QUELL really scary twist!! I'm in the middle of her training so far!!
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on December 06, 2012
keep it!!!
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on December 01, 2012
My advice: Don't Delete it!!! Continue!:)
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on November 29, 2012
I was thinking about deleting this story... message me personally if you think other wise, but I think since there are 6 people who added it as a favorite I won't but I would still like you to tell me if you want me to keep going, thank you!!
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on November 27, 2012
Amazingly written love it so much keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on November 25, 2012
Hi, you messaged me about giving you advise. I really would love to reply, but my account holds a fault that doesn't allow me to message people other than the Qfeast team, i'm currently trying to get it fixed, but if you could just hold that thought for now it would be great. I will get in contact with you as soon as it is fixed. Many thanks,

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on November 19, 2012
Awesome story!:)
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on November 16, 2012
Wow, an excellent remake of "The Hunger Games"! You just need a little more experience, and you could be a really successful idea. Great ideas, but they need to be a little more original to count as your own, well done though, keep up the good work! :D
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on November 15, 2012
Love this.
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on November 15, 2012