Chapter 7- Your Blood Tells Tales
"Solus! Wait I need to talk to--"
I ran around the corner and face first into his back. I fell, and Solus caught me again. But this time he used his other arm. He smiled and helped me to my feet.
"We really need to stop meeting like this. If I didn't know better, I'd say you were a klutz," he joked, smiling more.
Only around you, it seems.. I thought. But in reality I said
"Sorry. I need to talk to you."
"Ok, whats up?" He casually put his arms to his sides, turning the palm of his hand slightly to face away from me. If I didn't know he was bleeding, I wouldn't have noticed.
"Can I see your hand?" He hesitated, then showed you his good hand.
"What for?" he asked innocently.
"Your OTHER hand."
His smile seemed to waver for a moment then he sighed, shrugging.
"Alright..."
He turned the palm of his hand upward. I saw the cut from the sword, and his beautiful golden blood around it. For a second I forgot how to breathe. The legends were true! They really had golden blood...
His voice snapped me out of it. "I'd better get some water. Its bad if someone stays golden for too long."
"You can just leave that jerk golden for all I care," I mumbled. Solus looked troubled and shook his head.
"Why not?" I asked, both curious and a bit disappointed.
"If I turn someone to gold I turn their whole body into gold. Their heart can't beat, their mind can't work, their just.. frozen for eternity."
"So?" even as I said those words I knew there was greater meaning behind what Solus was saying.
"Being turned into pure gold for a few seconds can make you really sick, and cold. being turned into gold for a half hour..."
"Can kill you." My heart froze as I finished his sentence. Now I understand why Solus was acting so evasive. His power was deadly. Just like mine, except he could control his. I can't imagine how many rich folk want him to turn things into gold...
Solus started walking away. I hesitated, then grabbed his arm, stopping him. He looked at me, a bit surprised.
"Wait, your hand." I dug through my pockets and found a bandage. I always carry bandages, I get in trouble quite a bit. I held his wrist in my hand and moved to a water fountain. I turned it on and let the water dribble over his wound. Then I dried it gently with my sleeve. Done that, I put the bandage on his hand.
"There, all done." I smiled and put my hands on my hips, proud.
He was smiling at me. I smiled and raised a eyebrow.
"What?"
"Nothing. Thanks for the Band-Aid."
"It was nothing" I felt like we were echoing the words from earlier today, except the roles were reversed. Now he was thanking me, and I was cool with it.
"Lets get some water"
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
@BlueTheQuizWhiz97
(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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@Michael.Afton735
@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions