Chapter 1- Godfallen
A long time ago, there were only a few races. Humans, angels, demons, and woodfolk (animal people). The angels, being the most powerful, watched over the world and protected it from war and pain. They were known as a very beautiful, perfect, and powerful race. Each angel could make miracles, and it was rare that two angels had the same magic.Since angels were so strong magically, they were idolized. a third of the populations worshipped them, a third helped them and in return was watched over, and the rest wanted to be in their company
However, over time, a silent darkness grew. The angels could not detect it, for it was not any one organization or evil... It was jealously in the hearts of men
People started secretly hunting angels down, knowing that if their presence was that magical, the rest of them must be even stronger
At first, it was impossible. The angels being immortals were too strong. But after about 28 years they found their secret weakness. Soon angels were being killed. People got scared. How could their gods die?
But to the hunters, it was justifiable. "They are all powerful, and they don't share their knowledge? This is outrageous. Can't you see we're just being used as pawns for them?"
some people began to listen , but many did not. They still cared about the angels. Then, strangely, some rumors' started being spread
"An angels halo is good luck. It cures all deceases. A angels feather is the softest in the world, and the prettiest. Their golden blood, ichor, blood of the immortals can heal any wound and make someone powerful. That is, if your body is strong enough not to burn to ashes. And I heard that their hearts, made purely out of crystal, are so beautiful it can make a king cry"
People listened. They were convinced that these rumor's were correct. Mortals got a strange hunger in their hearts, begging for this power. The angels earthly friends tried to protect them, but it was all for naught.
After 500 long years.. The craze died down. All that was left out of 2 million angels were 15. They were so scattered across the world, they could never meet each other.
However, stories of their power spread far and wide. They became known as legends, as powerful friends..
And as gods.
It is now the present day. Many many races popped up, most of them hybrids, but none had angel wings or blood in them.
You were at school, and you recently heard of a new student joining the class..
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
@BlueTheQuizWhiz97
(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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@Michael.Afton735
@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions