Chapter 3- Your Eternal Kindness
"hey! Wait up!"You chased after him in the hall, stopping before him. You put your hands on your knees to catch your breathe. He looked at you, a bit worried.
"Are you alright?", he smiled and raised an eyebrow. You felt your heart beat a bit faster.
"y-yeah.. hey.. I just wanted to thank you for saving my butt in class".
"It was no problem. I like helping people," he said simply, as if he gave out answers to difficult math problems all the time.
"W-well.. I really appreciate it," your voice sounded weak to you, but Solus just giggled.
"Like I said, its no problem. What's your name?"
"You can just call me Ash." Solus seemed to be really nice, but up close there was something behind his smile.. like he was wearing it like a mask or something. He blinked and the thought quickly left, replaced by a feeling of foolishness. I must be imagining things..
"Well Ash, you can just call me Solus." He smiled again, and you felt a small flush slowly creep to your cheeks.
you giggled embarrassed, hiding your blush. You may have just made a new friend.
You walked together down the halls. As you walked, you noticed that no-one else decided to talk to him. You saw everyone was staring at you two though, their stares focused solely on him. The girls blushed, the boys looked away or narrowed their eyes, and a certain group of students saw him and instantly went to whispering.
He had them all under his aura.
Just before you reached gym class, two boys shoved past Solus, making him fall and bang his shoulder against the lockers. They snickered and went into class. You helped Solus up.
"Are you ok?"
He rubbed his shoulder, biting his lip slightly as if he had pain. But he's a angel, they can't be hurt normally...Or can they?
"I-I'm fine. Just didn't expect it, that's all."
Strangely, he didn't seem upset about it. However, you felt annoyed by those two bullies. Their names were Henry and Jonathan, and they liked picking on little people. But it seems dumb to pick on a immortal. You were about to suggest Solus uses some magic on them when the bell rang.
"we're late!" you shouted, grabbing Solus's arm and half dragging half leading him into the gym.
~Note From Author~
I am thinking of turning "you" into "I" perspective. Please tell me if you want it this way. Also, I'll be making the chapters shorter so you guys don't have to wait as long. Enjoy~
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
@BlueTheQuizWhiz97
(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
@moonston
@Kitten_Snowflakes
@MagicMouse16
@Michael.Afton735
@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
@moonston
@Michael.Afton735
@Kitten_Snowflakes
@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions