I need feedback on my poem! I was falling asleep last night when a random sentence popped into my head - "danced upon the parapets." This morning I wrote a poem with that line in it, except I need feedback, please. By the way, it's supposed to be kind of a free-verse poem thing. Here it is: Innocence shines in the eyes Of the little girl Who dances upon the parapets. (Parapets are protective railings along a tower, roof, or balcony.)