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http://www.qfeast.com/story/GDVYkw/Forestclan
Plz tell me what you think so far!
Plz tell me what you think so far!
Forestclan
Young Aquashine only memory of her birth clan is leaving and she seeks her history and what lies ahead in the future and find out about a prophesied cat before her named Silverflight for she is the only adult cat left from the previous generation with the villains known as darkclaw and lightclaw.
on December 31, 2014
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on December 31, 2014
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The story line and plot seem a bit rough. I believe this story can go far if you take the time to look over the things you've written. Always check over the work at least twice.