Hey---- Recently I've been receiving a lot of membership requests and also helper requests. I am totally fine with that and even promote it as I am just one person and having many different opinions is in general a good thing. Please note though, I am still running this page and if your review is unsatisfactory I will take it down. I expect you to follow the rules as this is a "professional" page as we are handing out real advice and critiques. Don't take this as a threat as most See More of you are doing truly magnificent and saying things I might not have said before. Thanks--- ElleyD
on July 03, 2014
Hey--- You're doing a great job at reviews. Your notes are spot on. Keep doing the good work!
Yea, definitely, admittedly I was a little afraid to tell people the whole truth as I can be harsh sometimes but you have worded it in a constructive way and I wanted to commend you for it. If you keep up the good work I may make you my right hand man ;) Good luck and Good writing!!!
on July 03, 2014
on July 03, 2014
Can i be reviewer? I got 9/10 o grammar nazi
on July 03, 2014
So I have given you membership to my page but before you do anything please do one more review of a story of your choosing. Try to make your review a little longer and have some advice in it. For the grammar, what English level are you at?
on July 03, 2014
Elleyd added a new chapter to The Victoria Era
An Uplifting
I sat silent in the living room stroking the abandoned cat that now sat in my lap. Marie sat playing with frays on the carpet and Liam sat in the chair opposite to me staring at the floor as if it had just told him the most interesting story ever told. A knock at the door lifted me from my daze a little and I trudged over to the door. Henrietta stood across my threshold with worry written all over her face. " Miss Clarissa, I- I didn't mean to come uninvited, but I just had to see you. I do n...
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on July 03, 2014
Hi MockingJay---
You have requested membership on my page. Also, you have asked to become an editor and a reviewer. Please take my Grammar Nazi quiz and tell me your score and review my story "My Poetry." After that, we will go from there!
You have requested membership on my page. Also, you have asked to become an editor and a reviewer. Please take my Grammar Nazi quiz and tell me your score and review my story "My Poetry." After that, we will go from there!
on July 03, 2014
hello?
on July 02, 2014
@qfeast
Like I said I have lots of questions and I'm pretty sure you'll find me really annoying very soon. So, are you a person, a computer system, or a group of people?
Like I said I have lots of questions and I'm pretty sure you'll find me really annoying very soon. So, are you a person, a computer system, or a group of people?
on July 02, 2014
14 right here :3
on July 02, 2014
Hi JeweledOwl---
You have requested membership to my page Editor and Reviser. You requested to be an editor [I assume grammatical editor if not please say so] and a reviser. So to be a grammatical editor you must take my quiz "Are You a Grammar Nazi?" and to be a reviser please review my story "My poetry." Get back to me and we'll talk.
You have requested membership to my page Editor and Reviser. You requested to be an editor [I assume grammatical editor if not please say so] and a reviser. So to be a grammatical editor you must take my quiz "Are You a Grammar Nazi?" and to be a reviser please review my story "My poetry." Get back to me and we'll talk.
So for grammar what English Level are you at?
The review was good but it should be a little lengthier, people like reading about themselves but I did take your advice which proves you have done what was requested of you. Please just do one more review of a story of your choosing and we'll go from there.
The review was good but it should be a little lengthier, people like reading about themselves but I did take your advice which proves you have done what was requested of you. Please just do one more review of a story of your choosing and we'll go from there.
on July 03, 2014
Are you a grammar nazi?: 9/10
My Poetry: I loved your poetic voice, and also the describitons and descriptive words. However, some of the chapters aren't exactly poems (notably Night Is Bright), but short stories. To make them more "poem-y" you should try to add rythmn.
My Poetry: I loved your poetic voice, and also the describitons and descriptive words. However, some of the chapters aren't exactly poems (notably Night Is Bright), but short stories. To make them more "poem-y" you should try to add rythmn.
on July 03, 2014
I've passed "Are you Grammar Nazi" and read "My Poetry" already. And I would mostly like to be a reviser
on July 02, 2014
on July 02, 2014
OK, so, I had no idea this many people would be asking me to read all their stories so I'm going to have to limit the amount I'm reading. I cannot read 20 30-chapter-long stories and get to everyone in an appropriate amount of time. If the chapters are really short, like I know some are, that's a different story but on average it just takes too much time to read that much. I will read as much as I need to to come up with a good review and good critiques. If I have free time on See More Qfeast I will definitely spend it finishing un-completely-read stories. Sorry but I hope you can understand!
on July 02, 2014
Name: Louie Mitils
Gender: male
Age: 17
Power: his blood is actually a millk-looking substance that can overtake the senses and basically put you at his mercy. It comes out of his hands in pools and if it even touches you it affects you. He is learning how to make a lot of it and how to shoot it at targets.
Appearance: I'll upload a pic but also he has white veins that are very prominent on his skin
Weakness: nothing in particular
Family: His parents love him and he is just at See More Xavier's school to avoid bullies
Other relations: none
Personality: Flirtatious/ romantic, tries to be the perfect storybook man
Brief backstory: He's had an amazing life except lots of bullying about being a mutant
Likes/ dislikes: Likes: acting, reading, and dating; dislikes: being disliked, broken hearts, and bullies
Extra information: He tries really hard to be the ideal hero
Gender: male
Age: 17
Power: his blood is actually a millk-looking substance that can overtake the senses and basically put you at his mercy. It comes out of his hands in pools and if it even touches you it affects you. He is learning how to make a lot of it and how to shoot it at targets.
Appearance: I'll upload a pic but also he has white veins that are very prominent on his skin
Weakness: nothing in particular
Family: His parents love him and he is just at See More Xavier's school to avoid bullies
Other relations: none
Personality: Flirtatious/ romantic, tries to be the perfect storybook man
Brief backstory: He's had an amazing life except lots of bullying about being a mutant
Likes/ dislikes: Likes: acting, reading, and dating; dislikes: being disliked, broken hearts, and bullies
Extra information: He tries really hard to be the ideal hero
Ember:*puts hands behind head* Find out everything about it first. How he created it, who he was, any possible more powerful person who could reverse it.... you get the gist.
on July 23, 2014
on July 02, 2014
