Chosen
Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.
Cristallite
Ok, like elleyd said on that other page. This story is AWESOME, Good pacing, awesome- oh wait I already said that- But seriously its one of the best stories i have ever read. I would definitely recommend these to others
on July 03, 2014
on July 02, 2014
Happy birthday 2 u!
Happy birthday 2 u!!!
Happy birthday 2 u!!!
on July 02, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323 added a new chapter to The Matchmaker
Welcome Back!
JARED'S POV
I was excited to move back to my old community. I missed all my friends and stuff. My dad's car pulled up in the parking lot to our new house. It was like our old one, but bigger. I was so tired and weary from the two and a half hour move. It was 4:30 AM. "You're going to school today." My dad said. "WHAT?" I exclaimed. "Just for the tour!" My mom added. "Ok." I said. I looked out the window and opened the door of the car.
(1:30 hours later)
"You'll have to take this stuff to pu... Read Full Chapter
I was excited to move back to my old community. I missed all my friends and stuff. My dad's car pulled up in the parking lot to our new house. It was like our old one, but bigger. I was so tired and weary from the two and a half hour move. It was 4:30 AM. "You're going to school today." My dad said. "WHAT?" I exclaimed. "Just for the tour!" My mom added. "Ok." I said. I looked out the window and opened the door of the car.
(1:30 hours later)
"You'll have to take this stuff to pu... Read Full Chapter
on July 02, 2014
I added another chapter!
on July 01, 2014
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@Crimsonthehedgehog @MockingjayDistrict @Number1Arianator @Sapphirerose @Parabolic @JeweledOwl812 @Beeesafe @FandomLover @Peaches_is_Awesome @Matlen I updated my story!!!!!
@Crimsonthehedgehog @MockingjayDistrict @Number1Arianator @Sapphirerose @Parabolic @JeweledOwl812 @Beeesafe @FandomLover @Peaches_is_Awesome @Matlen I updated my story!!!!!
on July 01, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323 added a new chapter to The Matchmaker
He's HERE!
(This picture is of Libby)
DAWN'S POV
Dawn: so, have u talked to Libby
Lindsay: yep! Her crush's moving back here
Dawn: :3
Lindsay: and going to our school! :D
Dawn: awesome
Jerome: o_O what is this
Dawn: OMG oops! I accidentally put u in the group chat!
Jerome: o_O O_o
Dawn: *deletes conversation*
LINDSAY'S POV (regular pov)
Lindsay: so, he's going to our school?!
Libby: yup
Lindsay: yay!
Libby: ikr! :) :D
Lindsay: when?!
Libby: 4 days
Lindsay: yipee!
Libby: G2G bai
Lindsay: bye
LIBB... Read Full Chapter
DAWN'S POV
Dawn: so, have u talked to Libby
Lindsay: yep! Her crush's moving back here
Dawn: :3
Lindsay: and going to our school! :D
Dawn: awesome
Jerome: o_O what is this
Dawn: OMG oops! I accidentally put u in the group chat!
Jerome: o_O O_o
Dawn: *deletes conversation*
LINDSAY'S POV (regular pov)
Lindsay: so, he's going to our school?!
Libby: yup
Lindsay: yay!
Libby: ikr! :) :D
Lindsay: when?!
Libby: 4 days
Lindsay: yipee!
Libby: G2G bai
Lindsay: bye
LIBB... Read Full Chapter
on July 01, 2014
Since you seem like a Harry Potter fan then you should read my story. It's called the secret Hogwarts students
on July 01, 2014
Happy Birthday!
on July 01, 2014
Chosen
Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.
@CrystalDiamond2323 A truly amazing original story, with adventure, action, and even a pinch of romance. The "element" idea is very widely used and popular, but you managed to give it a new and exciting twist, while still keeping the well-liked theme. Good job! Plus, it reminds me of Dauntless Initiate training (in a good way, of course ;))
Note: There are See More some small grammar mistakes throughout the story (note "small"). I recommend you go through the story once more and fix them. I also got confused in some parts of the story about who was talking when. Although this may be a big fix, you might want to make each character have his/her own unique style. If you can't in this story, try to do it if you ever make another story with different POV's. Lastly, as the story progressed, Amethyst no longer seemed to be the only main character (especially with the different POV's), so you might want to include the other important characters in your description.
All things considered, I'll give you two thumbs up! :D
Note: There are See More some small grammar mistakes throughout the story (note "small"). I recommend you go through the story once more and fix them. I also got confused in some parts of the story about who was talking when. Although this may be a big fix, you might want to make each character have his/her own unique style. If you can't in this story, try to do it if you ever make another story with different POV's. Lastly, as the story progressed, Amethyst no longer seemed to be the only main character (especially with the different POV's), so you might want to include the other important characters in your description.
All things considered, I'll give you two thumbs up! :D
on July 03, 2014
on June 30, 2014
@GymnasticsBubbleZo @Frozen_number1_fan
@Crimsonthehedgehog @MockingjayDistrict @Number1Arianator @Sapphirerose @Parabolic @JeweledOwl812 @Beeesafe @FandomLover @Peaches_is_Awesome @Matlen I updated my story!!!!!
@Crimsonthehedgehog @MockingjayDistrict @Number1Arianator @Sapphirerose @Parabolic @JeweledOwl812 @Beeesafe @FandomLover @Peaches_is_Awesome @Matlen I updated my story!!!!!
on June 30, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323 added a new chapter to The Matchmaker
Libby's crush
(The picture is of Libby)
LIBBY'S POV
(Flashback 5 years before)
"Libby! Come say hi to the guests!" My mom called. I ran down stairs, my long hair flying behind me. "Hello!" I said as my mom's best friend and her husband walked into the house. Then, I saw a boy, about my age walk in. "This is our son! He's your age!" My mom's friend exclaimed. "Hi! My name's Jared!" The blue eyed, brown haired boy said. "Um. Hi! I'm Libby!" I exclaimed. I was only ten, but I think that was the first time I'... Read Full Chapter
LIBBY'S POV
(Flashback 5 years before)
"Libby! Come say hi to the guests!" My mom called. I ran down stairs, my long hair flying behind me. "Hello!" I said as my mom's best friend and her husband walked into the house. Then, I saw a boy, about my age walk in. "This is our son! He's your age!" My mom's friend exclaimed. "Hi! My name's Jared!" The blue eyed, brown haired boy said. "Um. Hi! I'm Libby!" I exclaimed. I was only ten, but I think that was the first time I'... Read Full Chapter
on June 30, 2014
@GymnasticsBubbleZo
@Crimsonthehedgehog @MockingjayDistrict @Number1Arianator @Sapphirerose @Parabolic @JeweledOwl812 @Beeesafe @FandomLover @Peaches_is_Awesome @Matlen I updated my story!!!!!
@Crimsonthehedgehog @MockingjayDistrict @Number1Arianator @Sapphirerose @Parabolic @JeweledOwl812 @Beeesafe @FandomLover @Peaches_is_Awesome @Matlen I updated my story!!!!!
on June 30, 2014
The Matchmaker
Lindsay started her 9th grade year as a regular student, but then she starts a blog that helps people in her school find their true match, but she has a secret... She has never been in a relationship.
@CrystalDiamond2323 A great story, focused on coming-of-age and middle school life. It is realistic and relatable. I love the Matchmaker blog idea. Thumbs up!
Note: I cannot seem to grasp where the plot is going. What is the problem? The climax? The solution? And so on...
P.S: the principal is so weird...LOL:p
Note: I cannot seem to grasp where the plot is going. What is the problem? The climax? The solution? And so on...
P.S: the principal is so weird...LOL:p
on July 03, 2014
on June 30, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323 added a new chapter to The Matchmaker
Dawn's story to Libby
(This picture is Dawn mad at Bryan)
Anastasia and Dawn asked me to post the Bryan video on my blog. "Sure!" I replied. As soon as I got home, I flipped open my computer and posted the video Anastasia had emailed me. Dawn commented right away.
COMMENTS:
Dawn_101 : Isn't my revenge so thoughtful?!
Lindsay.C : um... Yes is guess?
Silver-Soul : haha! I laughed so hard when I re-watched the video!
Lindsay.C : ikr Silver!
It had gotten 200 likes in a mere 30 minutes! Dawn was probably feelin... Read Full Chapter
Anastasia and Dawn asked me to post the Bryan video on my blog. "Sure!" I replied. As soon as I got home, I flipped open my computer and posted the video Anastasia had emailed me. Dawn commented right away.
COMMENTS:
Dawn_101 : Isn't my revenge so thoughtful?!
Lindsay.C : um... Yes is guess?
Silver-Soul : haha! I laughed so hard when I re-watched the video!
Lindsay.C : ikr Silver!
It had gotten 200 likes in a mere 30 minutes! Dawn was probably feelin... Read Full Chapter
on June 30, 2014
Read the new chapters I posted for New Girl!
on June 30, 2014