Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

Sonic?

Sonic?
Silver's POV
I laid the pretty hedgehog on the couch in the jet escape.I jumped out side.I grabbed her suitcase. I hauled it up to the jet. " Man, this is heavy.", I grunted. She must've fainted. I went to Shadow. He was sleeping in the pilot chair.I nuged him."WAKE UP SHADOW!!" His eyes opened.
"WHAT THE flip  DO YOU WANT!!"  
"watch the girl on the couch ok?"
"FINE!!"
Silver left.
Shadow's POV
I dragged my stupid self to the couch. I found a girl sleeping there? Who the heck is she?, i wondered.She had a crown on.I bent over and took the crown off her head.I looked on the back of it.It said PRINCESS DIAMOND imprinted on the back. Princess! I blushed.I felt so stupid.I threw the necklace on her. I sat on the floor.Her eyes opened.
Diamond's POV
I opened my eyes to see a black and red hedgehog.I sat up.I was on a pink couch in a jet. I ran out of the jet, but fell when i didn't notice there were no stairs.The hedgehog got up.I ran and stopped.The castle was on fire,there were shooting everywhere,and robots everywhere. Tears were streaming off my face.I was still in my dress. I tapped my head.Where's my crown?! I started to look for it.The hedgehog was standing next to me, his arms crossed. I wiped the tears off my face.
He grabbed me by the arm. I broke free." Stop it! Your not taking me away from my family and home!"I screamed
"I have to! Your home is under attack!! your so stupid!!", he said to me.
" I am not stupid!!"
Silver's POV
I fought some robots and heard sceaming.Princess!! I ran over to where she was. "Stop fighting Shadow!!",I yelled.He was silent.So was the princess. I grabbed Princess Diamond's hand.She broke free. "Princess,I'm not trying to hurt you.Just follow me and i'll explain everything to you."
Diamond nodded. She followed me to the jet.Shadow was coming too.She sat on thje couch with her puffy blue dress. I sat on the floor next to Shadow.I took a breath. "Princess, your kingdom is under attack by a guy named Eggman. You can't go back in there.You'll die.We are fighting with Eggbut. Your going to have to stay with us for awhile to get your castle repaired.Your staying in our place. I am Silver, and the other hedgehog is Shadow.The blue one is Sonic, the pink one is Amy, and the red enchidna is Knuckles and more." I bowed since she was royalty.

Diamond's POV
I frowned. I lifted his chin up. He blushed."Don't do that Silver.I don't want anyone else to know I'm a princess." Silver nodded. I looked on the couch.I finally found my crown.I opened my backpack and put it in a small chest.My leg was still aching.It had gotten worse. It was bleeding.I looked a my dress and it was stained with blood, dust, and it was a little burnt. I frowned. Amy, Sonic and knuckles came in the jet. Other agents were still fighting. Shadow jumped into the pilot's chair. Silver sat down next to Sonic.Amy sat next to me on the couch.She smiled.
" You don't love Sonicdo you?", she wispered in my ear
"Eww, Of course not Amy." We laughed. Then a light blue hedgehog came in and we took off in the jet. She sat next to me on the other side.
"Hi,I'm Sapphire."
"I'm Diamond." We shook hands and chatted.
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
NO
STAHP.
THE DOUBLE SPACES See More
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 10, 2016