My creepypasta

It’s shortish and some words are repeated but I guess it’s goo dunno ?‍♀️

published on October 01, 2020not completed

Le Rake

When we got to the house we were shocked at how nice it was it was like looking at the White House it was large with tall white columns that came out of the porch and when I stepped onto the porch I was surprised their was no door bell so I knocked on the door and when it opened I was pulled in by a scary man who blended into the shadows when Ben got in I grabbed my knife and in a deep dark uncertain voice said,” Who are you, and don’t you know it’s rude to pull girls?” Then a small little boy whom looked to be about twelve or thirteen said in a small high pitch voice,” Who are you, and why are you here at my house, out of all the other houses in the neighborhood.” I said in the nicest but uncomfortable voice I could manage,” I am Annabeth and this is my boyfriend Ben, we were sent here by Slendy to bodyguard someone named The Raker,” “ I am the Raker he said going into his full height he was almost as tall as Slendy but maybe about five inches smaller in size he had long blonde hair with a scar the size of my hand which was a pretty normal hand size he was very pale and had rings around his eyes which meant he probably didn’t get enough sleep. “I will show you where your rooms are I thought you two might want to have separate rooms so the rooms will be next to the other,” he said while guiding us up a twisted staircase with marble steps the whole house looked as if it were built during the Victorian age it had pale wallpaper with wood flooring it had a white and green rug next to a fireplace with a pinkish red brick color. When we got to my room it had a light pink wallpaper with a blue and red carpet, that had what looked like a wolf and it’s cub, the bed was pale with super plush pillows that had a light blue cover the blankets were blue and it had a drape that went all the way around the bed I thought of myself as a princess locked away in a tower, then I grabbed my bags set them on the bed and then I went across the hall to see Ben’s room and when I walked in I felt like I walked into a war zone it was camo color it had wallpaper that was very dark with tan desert sand gray and sage green. His bed was a car shape but it was more like a military tank and the barrel was pointing straight at the door then I saw that you can actually move it then Ben jumped onto the bed and pointed the barrel at me and said in a very manly voice,” Are you a German soldier?!” “No, dear soldier I am an American through and through.” He pointed the barrel towards the window and jumped right on top of me I clawed at him trying to get him off but he just looked at me in a mischievous way, and said,” I have a good view, what about down their,” “ It’s ok I guess.” I said while blushing he just stared affectionately at me and so to get him off of me I kicked his stomach as hard as I could and he jumped up in surprise. “Hey, what was that for?! What did I ever do to you?” *This dude, he jumps on me and thinks I shouldn’t kick him,* “Boy, be quite you jumped on me and you think I shouldn’t kick you, wow I’m so sorry.” He just looked at me and then we heard Raker say,” Jeez, can you keep it down, oh, and when you two lovebirds are done I have school stuff we need to talk about.” “Okay!” We both shouted while running down the stairs,” I’ll get their first,” “No, I’ll get their first!” I decided to just teleport their so I let him get off the stairs and then I teleported to the table and when he got their he was shocked and said in surprise way,” How’d you get here when you were five steps behind me?!” “Well it’s called teleportation, come on say it with me. T E L E P O R T A T I O N.” He just looked at me like I came from Mars or something so in a kidding way I slapped him across the face. “I know you can teleport, but that’s cheating!!” Noah( the raker if you haven’t caught on if you haven’t caught on imma just guess your slow) was just sitting in the back and finally said something “ We need to talk about enrolling you guys and what your names will be.” “My name will be Annabelle and Bens name will be Bruce and you know how I have red and black hair and pale skin well we’ll be changing that and Ben will also be changing the way he looks and since his body temperature is below freezing (from him drowning ;-;) he’ll be changing it to 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit,” “Ok, umm, well I just need to let you know that their are walking talking barbies at school and they bully me so if you see me with a black eye, bloody nose or a knife mark across my face it’s because of them and their boyfriends, the barbies names are Lilac and Rose and their boyfriends are Jacob and Richard they don’t like Lilac and Rose and it’s pretty obviously they say no when they ask to go to the mall or to do anything, oh and Ben be careful they’ll try taking your girl~,” he said in a sing songy voice which made me turn a bright red color all over from embarrassment of course I shouldn’t have been embarrassed because he was my boyfriend but just having the thought of two or three boys fighting over me was funny but also romantic. “We also have uniforms boys wear black and white dress clothes I don’t know why but we do but oh well, and the girls have to wear a sailor shirt the colors are white and dark blue, and have to have their hair in a bun or ponytail like in anime.” “Oh, ok I’ll be ok with a ponytail if I’m told I need a bun cause of how long my hair is that person has another thing coming and can i be a yandere since its like anime?” “I mean sure if you want to get in trouble.”When were done I teleported back to my room and fell on my bed *at least it was a soft landing* as I was falling a sleep I heard my name through the ear piece *annebeth* I jumped up in surprise *Annebeth can you hear me* i soon figured out  it was probably Slendy I grabbed my phone and yelled “ What the heck, I was trying to get a little peace and quiet and you yell in my ear!!” “I’m sorry, chill, but I got the location on the assassins and they are supposedly the living Barbie dolls boyfriends. I have a plan but I don’t think you and Ben will like it.” My heart started pounding cause what he was going to say was obviously not going to be good.” I’ll do what ever needs to be done as long as we can stay together.” “Well about that... You’re going to have to win over Jacob he’s the main assassin for Zalgo which we just found out that he is your real father.” “Do I need to tell this to Ben.?” “No he’s been listening.” “Oh, hey Ben, can we speak in private please Slendy?.” “Yes, of course I’ll let you two talk.” “Thank you.” When I hanged up on him I jumped off my bed and did a front flip and surprisingly landed. When I got to Bens room he was curled up in a ball on his ginormous bed... crying because I’ve never seen him cry before I ran over to him, pulled him up and gave him a big long hug and in a small, soft comforting voice said,” You know I’ll always love you, right?”” Yeah,I guess so, but I don’t want you to leave me for some other guy just so we can save Noah, cause will you follow him and go on dates and stuff I’ll be doing all the dirty stuff by myself without you *sobs* and I know that us creepy pastas are supposed to be hard and tuff but since you came around I’ve changed and so have the others. Your the light inside all of us that we haven’t been able to feel or have in forever *sobs again* s-so now I’ll be giving up the only thing that makes me, me for some random dude who’s probably a gold digging jerk and I’ll have to be luring little barbies who can’t protect them selves, all they can do is slap me away and that won’t even do anything while you’ll be having fun at the movies or the beach or something like we use to do.” By that point I was crying while still holding on to him I was acting like a child who got their sucker taken away, no not ugly crying just crying cause he was crying“I don’t want to leave you,  I love you so much.” I don’t care what you think cause... darling I’d still catch a grenade for yaaa throw my head on a blade for yaaa, take a bullet straight through my brain, yes I would die for ya baby, but would you do the same?” “Really did you just get that from a song, and yes, I would do the same.”
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