Tormented Life

Tormented Life

After being homeschooled her whole life Fay decides she has had enough. Though already 15 she starts high school. What will happen to her. How will her mum take this change in life style.

published on June 02, 2014not completed

Autumn and Shannon

Autumn and Shannon I walk slowly in and look around. I see food, students, tables, chairs and well pretty much everything you see in a cafeteria. I look over at a table where two girls sit. They both have silver blonde hair and have the same sort of face. The only difference is one wears their hair tied up with a white shirt, the other wears their hair down with a black shirt.

I grab my food and walk over to them.
"Hi, can I please sit with you?" I ask politely. They look at me kindly and then turn to each other.
"Of course you can, my name is Autumn," Says the girl with the pony tail.
"And I'm Shannon,' The other girl adds. I smile and sit down with them. Suddenly I see Daniel walk over to us and sit down. The girls wave at him and welcome him. He smiles back at them. I'm guessing all of them are friends. Daniel then pokes his head around the girls and notices me sitting there, eating my nachos.
"Nice nachos?" he questions. I nod enthusiastically.
"They are delicious," I explain. He picks up his lunch and plonks himself down in the spare seat next to me. I know I'm blushing because I can feel my face burning hotter than these nachos. I look at his lunch. All I see is a pile of chips and half a brownie.
"Why don't you have a proper lunch?" I ask curiously.
"I got to the cafeteria late and this was all that was left," he replies. I look at my nachos. I've eaten half of it and am not so hungry anymore.
"Have the rest of my nachos," I order. He looks at me with a face that reads : 'Really I can have them?' I nod furiously.
"Thank you so much Fay, I'm starving," he tells me. I blush even more.
We all sit there and eat our lunch together, laughing the whole time.
RIIIING!!
I shield my ears as the bell rings through the school.
"Hey show me your schedule," Autumn asks. I hand it to her and she suddenly has a very excited look on her face. "We're all in art together!" she squeals and looks at Daniel, Shannon and I for our reactions. Shannon and I look at each other with delighted looks on our faces. I turn to Daniel and we look at each other in the eye by accident. Just like at the gate. He fills me and replaces my insides with jelly. His smile is kind and heart warming.
"Come on lovebirds, it's time for art!" Shannon teases. I punch her in the arm then we all burst out laughing.
"Oww," Shannon complains. We all laugh harder.
"Ok, as much as I hate to side with my sister, you guys do look like that," Autumn says in between giggles. I glance at Daniel to find him doing the same thing. We turn away from each other and blush furiously.
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AWESOME STORY!!!!
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thanks! :D
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 05, 2014
PLEASE MAKE DAWN NICER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANNOT LIKE THE PERSON WHO IS ALREADY IN A SHIP!!!!!!!!!!! BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Sorry about that)
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That, and she is like the biggest jerk in the entire story. WTH?
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thanks
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on July 04, 2014
Okay, apology accepted.
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on July 02, 2014
You know, I didn't want to spoil it for everyone else but my plan was to make Dawn nicer and nicer and eventually Dawn and Fay would be friends
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on July 02, 2014
:( look I said I was sorry
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on July 02, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
OMG I forgot about this story then I found it again! Yay! Awesome story, how come Dawn is rude and whatever? You didn't need to include my OC. Great story btw, I rated five stars!
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on June 29, 2014
sorry I didn't really know how to add Dawn in and I didn't want to let you down, if you want me to make her nicer I will
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on June 26, 2014
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on June 26, 2014
haha cool neontiger! but you forgot "We used to be best buddies, and now we're not, I wish you would tell me whyyyyyy!......do you wanna build a snowman? It doesn't have to be a snowman"
"Go away Anna"
"Ok byee.."
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[knock knock] Do you wanna build a snowman? Or ride our bikes around the halls? I think some company is overdue, I've started talking to the pictures on the walls!
Hang in there, Joan!
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Nuuhhhh nuuuhhh nuuuuhhh! (Sad music at end...:(()
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on June 14, 2014
"Elsa, please I know you're in there, people are asking where you've been, they say have courage, but im trying to, im right out here for you, just let me iiiiiiiiiin! We only have each other! It's just you and me, what are we gonna dooooo! do you wanna build a snowman
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on June 14, 2014
"See you in two weeks."
"Do you have to go?"
"You'll be fine, Elsa."
(sad music plays in background parents are leaving and then they DIE!! )
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on June 14, 2014
I gets a little lonely, all these empty rooms, just watching the hours tick byyy! *click clock click clock*

"I'm scared, it's getting stronger!"
"Getting upset only makes it worse, calm down" *steps toward Elsa*
"No! I don't wanna hurt you!"
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on June 14, 2014
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on June 14, 2014
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on June 14, 2014
Hah awesome when i read the words "Do you wanna build a snowman?" I started singing in my head, "Come on lets go and play, I never see you anymore, come out the door it's like you've gone awwwwaaayyyyyyy!"
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on June 14, 2014
Also MockingjayDistrict, I'm reading your story 'new girl' and it's amazing
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on June 05, 2014
Thanks MockingjayDistrict, I'll try and make a Dawn! :D
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on June 05, 2014
Wow, this is amazing! Please write more! Can I have a character named Dawn? If I can't that's fine. You're a really talented writer!!!!
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on June 04, 2014
Thanks guys!! :D
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on June 04, 2014
I know right NeonTiger
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on June 02, 2014
I love the art class chapter! But I have to admit, OUR art class teacher sounds NOTHING like her -_-
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on June 02, 2014
Thanks it's my first story
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on June 02, 2014
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on June 02, 2014
Aww thanks!!
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on June 02, 2014
LOVE IT!!! <3 <3 <3 :D
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on June 02, 2014