The break of an icy heart

The break of an icy heart

when young denisa gets a job as a maid she learns her masters son is a little different

published on November 28, 2014completed

Alois Mutenia Popecu

Alois Mutenia Popecu After they told his parents, they moved into they're own house. They decide that their child would be another territory,Muntenia. Because now she was a vampire she now worn long sleeve dresses and gloves because vampires were sensative to the sun. When it was time to have the child, Denisa maid toke care of her(Vlad wasn't aloud to see the birth).  When he was born, Denisa held him tightly to her chest. He had bleach blond hair(which was weird because both Denisa and Vlad had dark brown hair). He also had bright red eyes and pale skin."What should we name him" She asked Vlad when he came back.
"how a bout Alois after one of my old friends"
"Alright, Alois Mutenia Popecu it is"
As Alois grew up people began to wonder about him of the way he looked so different from his parents. Plus country and territories usually stayed one age and Alois stayed age 7 and people wondered why. Denisa and Vlad stayed 28 and 29 and it was easier to hide it. So many people wondered they decided they had to go before they found out that they were country and territories. They up and left so no one would ever no where they were. They left a normal human to take over their house.  They stayed hidden for 100 years and Alois wanted to know want happened in his home town. One night he walked there but it took him a couple of days. When he got their people still looked at him strange, it was his clothes, it was the same kind of clothes he worn 100 years ago. As he walked up to his old home, he knocked on the door to see a teenage girl stairing at him. She kneeled down asking who he was.
"I'm Alois Popecu"He said in his soft high pitched voice. The girl stood up and backed up, she know that Alois once lived here.
"That can't be possible, Alois Popecu either is dead or much older"
"But i am Alois Popecu, My family left 100 years ago"
The girl went inside real quick to see the painted family portait of Alois,Denisa,Vlad, and Alois' grandparents. He look just like the painting and she couldn't believe it. Alois was at her front door still age 7. She let him in to see what he wanted and she saw that even though he was over 100 years old he still acted like a child. He would point out the changes of the house and when he saw the painting and smiled at it as if his grandparents could still see him. He then asked,"Can you show me around and then i can go".
" alright" As the went though the house, Alois point out rooms he remember from his past. He would say which room was which, like the room he slept in as a young child or the room he was born in. When he entered in his old room he ran in and fell on his back. He sat right back up and said to her,"Why do you live in this house"
"I don't know, why did you leave"
"oh, I'm the repersentive of Mutenia and people were curious about me"
She then went to look like for he mom but when she came back Alois was gone.What she didn't know Alois had left but he was coming back
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Awesome :P
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thanks
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Me ether
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on December 13, 2014
But i don't know what about him i should write about
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on December 13, 2014
That's a good idea
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on December 13, 2014
thanks( i was thinking of tell the story about Alois)
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on December 13, 2014
hmmm......*tilts head* if I get an idea I will tell you :D
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on December 13, 2014
well i need an idea for it
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on December 13, 2014
you sould its really good
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on December 13, 2014
i'm thinking of doing a second story
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on December 13, 2014
you are welcome *bows*
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on December 11, 2014
Nice
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thank you :3
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on December 01, 2014
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on December 01, 2014