The Ultimate Guide to Mary Sues

Have you ever felt that your OC is a Mary Sue? Have you ever wanted to change a Mary Sue into a good oc? This is the book for you!

published on December 28, 2015not completed

7 Clichès to avoid:

The knight saves the princess. [Bleh, so cliche. That's why I .:spoiler warning:. Made Link be dependant on Zelda for once. Way less cliche.]

-And they lived happily ever after

A girl meets a hot boy at school

Love at first sight

The whole "They were friends since preschool and their bond grew closer" thing.

They discovered their amazing talent by-

Villain captures princess.
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Do you think WolfSun has /to/ much of a tragic past?
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on June 01, 2016
Just a question about the bi-coloured eyes.
I wanna make an OC that has a small power, but I want one of her eyes to be the colour that matches that power. Normally, she would have brown eyes, but I want her to control small amounts of water, which made me think about making one of her eyes blue....
Should I?
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It would be ok. As long as she has a reason for the eye thing (Which I can see, she does*
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on April 13, 2016
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on April 13, 2016
I think I may have made a Anti-Sue now....
I tried to make a new Sonic OC, tried to make her Non-Mary-Sue....
But she just turned out dull, and bland, and boring...
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on April 04, 2016
..... PM me about this, I need to check and see if Jackie is a Mary-Sue.
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on April 02, 2016
Thing is, for my CP OC, her weapon is a knife so she can avenge her family using the weapon that the killer used. So, yeah. x3 She has a reason for the knife. Also, sure, R'ena likes Jeff, but her goal is to kill him, so. . . That is SO not a Romantic-Sue. x3 You get it? x3
Excellent guide, though.
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on January 02, 2016