Make A Move

Make A Move

I can't write a description. That'll give away, and we both know I can't do that. Just read the story, it'll all make sense later. Creepypasta OC?: [ ] Yes, of course! What did you expect? [ ] No, I have enough for now. [✓] Maybe, you'll have to read to find out.

published on May 03, 2015not completed

Pain

Pain A punch. A pull. A lot of pain. I'm out of focus. A kick. I try to push away. I don't know what's going on. I'm dizzy, and I just keep on getting hit while I try to push through it.
The pain becomes overwhelming. Everything gets darker slowly, and I black out.
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let me guess.. depression
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I know how it feels too. And no problem with the miscommunication! :3
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on May 05, 2015
I used to be depressed I know how it feels. But my best wishes to her and sorry for the misunderstanding :)
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on May 05, 2015
Sorry if I sounded rude, I was just stating my point and confusion. But there isn't anything to do with depression, and I kinda doubt she'll fall into it.
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on May 05, 2015
it was just very dramatic it was just an opinion
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on May 05, 2015
How does that sound like depression? I'm seriously confused.
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on May 04, 2015
But nothing that involves depression has happened yet. She got into a fight somehow and was brought to the hospital. She hasn't even talked about her emotions yet, because things have been moving too quickly for her.
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on May 04, 2015
just sounds like a case of depression
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on May 04, 2015
What does depression have to do with the story?
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on May 04, 2015
this story
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on May 04, 2015
I really like it.
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Thanks! Would you like more chapters? :3
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yeah
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