It's who we are

It's who we are

Sorta based on Lego Ninjago, 5 friend find out one of them could become the next master of power/powers. However they're not the only ones, a tournament is set up to see who is the best of many fighters, however the friends soon find out there's more to it than that...As a legend is unfolded.

published on August 18, 2015not completed

Jackie's fear

Jackie woke up in the middle of nothing but darkness. She slowly sat up, holding her head, which was killing her. She looked around. "CJ, Sapphire, Ben, Josh?"
"Hell yeah! She didn't have a chance!" She heard a male say. She looked around...No one was there.
"Will she ever?" She heard another say. She looked around again. The other where standing there, talking. She could move, just sit there.
"Hell no, master of water my ass" She heard Josh say. What was going? They all looked at her. "Look there she is, can't even stand up" He walked over slowly.
"What are you talking about?" Jackie looked up and asked him.
"Oh you know? How I beat you, and now you're having trouble standing...Typical Jackie, YOU COULD NEVER ACCEPT DEFEAT!" Josh knelled down.
"That's 'cause you cheated!" Jackie tried to stand up.
"Did I? How? I won fair and square, admit it!" Josh stood back up.
"No!" Jackie slowly started to stand.
"You'll never prove anything! You couldn't win! Admit it!" Josh back up a little.
She looked down and at him again. "I never loose!"
"That's what holding you back!" Josh yelled at her.
"FINE! I lost, he won. I don't care anymore" She felt herself being able to stand up again.
"That's it! Come on!" Josh yelled once more.
"But I can try again!" Jackie suddenly started glow very sightly. Suddenly a wall of water formed behind her. The darkness went away along with the others slowly. Jackie swung a punch at Josh. But as she did...Everything vanished. She looked at her arms and body. "What is this? Did I unlock my limit breaker?" She looked over at a door which suddenly opened, she walked over and went through. "That makes me a protector, now...I wait" She sat on the floor and looked at the door, in hope this wouldn't take long. She had done it, done what no one had done in 100 years.
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Aww yeah, that awesome supporting character though XDXDXD
Keep it going dude, 11 chapters in, just waiting to see where it goes from here!
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HEhehe >:)
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on August 22, 2015
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on August 22, 2015
Uhh...... what did I do, exactly, in my fear chapter?
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You accepted that you lost.
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Hence why you got your LIMIT BREAKER, you pushed past that, and became more powerful. So yeah, deal with it.
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on August 21, 2015
WHAT?! NO! F*CK OFF MAN, I'D NEVER DO THAT!!!
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on August 21, 2015
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on August 21, 2015
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on August 21, 2015
:0 the suspense!!! It kills!!!
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on August 21, 2015
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on August 21, 2015
XD *takes Pom poms out* go Cj! Go Cj!
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Wow and it's CJ not Cj XD jk
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on August 20, 2015
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on August 20, 2015
F*CK YOU DUDE, F*CK YOU!!!!
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MWhahahahahahahahhahhahahhahhahhaha XD
Deal with it -_-
You're dead to me too.
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on August 18, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
I did not think anyone else liked ninjago...
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Yeah it's good, I wouldn't say I am a massive fan but the songs are good, the episodes aren't predicable. So yeah it's pretty good.
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Ok. TTYL. :)
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on August 19, 2015
Yo, I'm writing right now so ttyl XD
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on August 19, 2015
XD Yeah. I love Zane's sense of humor. Hes such an odd character too.
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on August 19, 2015
Dragon Ball Z, but the remastered version is call Dragon Ball Z Kai
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on August 19, 2015
Also, what's your favorite fandom?
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on August 19, 2015
And he is just so, ninja like "Ninja never quit, ninja never quit" XD Like I like Zane but being a nindorid makes him wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too op for the other to compete tbh XD
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on August 19, 2015
Kai would defiantly be my second favorite. His name seems to fit in well with his element. He was also the very first character we meet In the series.
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on August 19, 2015
He is awesome, but I like Kai the most. I hear his name I'm like "Well he has badass hair, he is the power of fire, which is awesome, and his name reminds me of my fave fandom" XD
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on August 19, 2015
I love Zane. Hes so awesome. I was really sad at the end of his season. That season was the rebooted season.
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on August 19, 2015
Defeating the golden master dude XD
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on August 19, 2015
Also I cant remember what they were doing In that season
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah XD But, despite Loyd being all important, ZANE STILL STOLE THE MOMENT! I WAS DYING XD
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on August 19, 2015
XD Yeah. I think the other characters needed more character development. Also, I see what you mean about the age thing.
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on August 19, 2015
No no, I like the age thing, it sped things up. We didn't have to have a "15 years later" moment. But I like how in S5 they just took him out like "F*ck you, no one likes you"
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on August 19, 2015
I know! Lloyd came In as a bratty defenseless kid, and all of a sudden he's the most important person. You can't just do that. It bothers me even more since they forced him to age.
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on August 19, 2015
Oh right, I never watched the movies so XD Anyway, should cool. the one thing that pissed me off was the fact...Loyd comes out of no where and is like "Yeah, all the powers, mastered them, and now I'm the main character" like really?
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on August 19, 2015
I'm pretty sure they're doing another season after the ghost one.
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on August 19, 2015
The number of seasons depends on weather you count the movies that started the series or not.
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on August 19, 2015
Season 6? I only thought there was 5.
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah. I love the unexpected part of the show. I think the next season, they're on the run from the cops. Thats pretty unexpected.
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah but genuinely, like the never really won like all the time, yet never lost all the time. it was always unexpected.
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah. Nobody could predict what would happen to Zane.
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on August 19, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
If you f*cking dare make me lose, you're dead to me!
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>: ) Heheheheheh, don't tempted me
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on August 18, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
X3 Go Jackie!!! XD
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Well then -_- The game is now on FOR REAL XD
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on August 18, 2015
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