It's who we are

It's who we are

Sorta based on Lego Ninjago, 5 friend find out one of them could become the next master of power/powers. However they're not the only ones, a tournament is set up to see who is the best of many fighters, however the friends soon find out there's more to it than that...As a legend is unfolded.

published on August 18, 2015not completed

You cheated!

Jackie and Josh stood still as the stage slowly cut and slip into a smaller circle. It began to rise and there was a loud cheer from the crowd. The stage stopped about 10 feet off the ground. "Let's get this fight STARTED! The first one to fall out of the ring...LOOSES" The announcer yelled as a bell went off once. Instantly, Josh and Jackie ran across the 40 meter stage. A dark smoke started to come from Josh, surrounding his body in it, but he was still visible. Jackie didn't have much she could fight with at this time, due to there being not water and it was extremely hot. Josh jumped as the reached each other. Jackie swung a punch to his chest, only to go right through him as he turned to a light grey smoke. He landed behind her and became normal again. Jackie tried to turn, but Josh was now one step ahead and elbowed her in the back. She staggered forward, but recovered quickly. They turned to face each other. Jackie shot a burst of water from her hand at Josh. Josh twisted his body and backwards ducked slightly. The water missed but Jackie was right behind it and punch Josh in the face as he came back up. After the punch, she went to punch him again, right in the chest. Josh blocked the punch with his right hand and countered with an uppercut to her face. They kept swing punches, elbows and kicks at each other.

That was until they stopped and looked over at a rattling pipe on their right. That was until it spewed out water at them both knocking them back. A small ditch formed in the stage and was now filled with water. "Well, that happened" Josh thought to himself. Jackie, moved her arms to the front of her and the water formed a wall in front of her. She then sent in at Josh, Josh quickly rolled to the side and just avoided it. He got up and ran at her. He slid and his body became a grey smoke again, going right through her. She was ready this time and brought the water back and over her. Josh got up and back to normal, but before he could turn the water flooded him and he fell off the stage. He grabbed a hold of the side, Jackie sent the water after him. Josh put his legs on the side of the stage and kicked upwards. he turned to grey smoke and dodged the water. He landed and water went down the side. Jackie readied herself. Josh ran at her but stopped soon after and jumped. He went higher and higher into the air. Twisted his body till he was facing down again. A large amount of black smoke built up around and behind him. He came down with speed and Jackie looked confused yet worried. Josh slammed into the ground, sending large amounts of smoke all around him. Jackie tried to stop herself from moving, but the smoke was too powerful and blow her away and off the side of the stage. She fell all the way down and hit the ground with a thud.

The smoke cleared, leaving the the now cracked ground beneath Josh. "Oh my god! What a move! Josh was not holding out! AND THEREFOR...DUE TO JACKIE HAVING FALLEN OFF THE SIDES, JOSH WINS!" The crowd let off another loud cheer, as the stage lowered again. Josh turned and walked away to the door. Jackie stood up and ran after him. Once inside she grabbed his shoulder and turned him around. "YOU CHEATED!"
Josh, frowned at her and pushed her off. "Calm down! And no I didn't! You're just butt hurt 'cause I beat you, miss chosen one!" Josh walked off leaving jackie stood by the door. "I'll get you,for making me look like a fool" Jackie muttered under her breath.
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Aww yeah, that awesome supporting character though XDXDXD
Keep it going dude, 11 chapters in, just waiting to see where it goes from here!
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HEhehe >:)
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on August 22, 2015
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on August 22, 2015
Uhh...... what did I do, exactly, in my fear chapter?
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You accepted that you lost.
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Hence why you got your LIMIT BREAKER, you pushed past that, and became more powerful. So yeah, deal with it.
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on August 21, 2015
WHAT?! NO! F*CK OFF MAN, I'D NEVER DO THAT!!!
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on August 21, 2015
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on August 21, 2015
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on August 21, 2015
:0 the suspense!!! It kills!!!
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on August 21, 2015
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on August 21, 2015
XD *takes Pom poms out* go Cj! Go Cj!
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Wow and it's CJ not Cj XD jk
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on August 20, 2015
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on August 20, 2015
F*CK YOU DUDE, F*CK YOU!!!!
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MWhahahahahahahahhahhahahhahhahhaha XD
Deal with it -_-
You're dead to me too.
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on August 18, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
I did not think anyone else liked ninjago...
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Yeah it's good, I wouldn't say I am a massive fan but the songs are good, the episodes aren't predicable. So yeah it's pretty good.
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Ok. TTYL. :)
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on August 19, 2015
Yo, I'm writing right now so ttyl XD
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on August 19, 2015
XD Yeah. I love Zane's sense of humor. Hes such an odd character too.
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on August 19, 2015
Dragon Ball Z, but the remastered version is call Dragon Ball Z Kai
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on August 19, 2015
Also, what's your favorite fandom?
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on August 19, 2015
And he is just so, ninja like "Ninja never quit, ninja never quit" XD Like I like Zane but being a nindorid makes him wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too op for the other to compete tbh XD
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on August 19, 2015
Kai would defiantly be my second favorite. His name seems to fit in well with his element. He was also the very first character we meet In the series.
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on August 19, 2015
He is awesome, but I like Kai the most. I hear his name I'm like "Well he has badass hair, he is the power of fire, which is awesome, and his name reminds me of my fave fandom" XD
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on August 19, 2015
I love Zane. Hes so awesome. I was really sad at the end of his season. That season was the rebooted season.
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on August 19, 2015
Defeating the golden master dude XD
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on August 19, 2015
Also I cant remember what they were doing In that season
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah XD But, despite Loyd being all important, ZANE STILL STOLE THE MOMENT! I WAS DYING XD
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on August 19, 2015
XD Yeah. I think the other characters needed more character development. Also, I see what you mean about the age thing.
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on August 19, 2015
No no, I like the age thing, it sped things up. We didn't have to have a "15 years later" moment. But I like how in S5 they just took him out like "F*ck you, no one likes you"
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on August 19, 2015
I know! Lloyd came In as a bratty defenseless kid, and all of a sudden he's the most important person. You can't just do that. It bothers me even more since they forced him to age.
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on August 19, 2015
Oh right, I never watched the movies so XD Anyway, should cool. the one thing that pissed me off was the fact...Loyd comes out of no where and is like "Yeah, all the powers, mastered them, and now I'm the main character" like really?
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on August 19, 2015
I'm pretty sure they're doing another season after the ghost one.
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on August 19, 2015
The number of seasons depends on weather you count the movies that started the series or not.
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on August 19, 2015
Season 6? I only thought there was 5.
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah. I love the unexpected part of the show. I think the next season, they're on the run from the cops. Thats pretty unexpected.
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah but genuinely, like the never really won like all the time, yet never lost all the time. it was always unexpected.
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on August 19, 2015
Yeah. Nobody could predict what would happen to Zane.
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on August 19, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
If you f*cking dare make me lose, you're dead to me!
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>: ) Heheheheheh, don't tempted me
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on August 18, 2015
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on August 18, 2015
X3 Go Jackie!!! XD
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Well then -_- The game is now on FOR REAL XD
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on August 18, 2015
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