Ticci Toby

Ticci Toby

Toby is a boy who sees things not so good. He sees a slender looking man. No face, and pure pale. What does he do this next day? Will he EVER give up?

published on June 21, 2016not completed

The man

Later on that day, I went to my window. It was getting dark, but a man stood there. He starred... Well, he couldn't he had no face. No eyes, mouth, but a nose without nostrils. My eyes widened and ran into the living room. "No! It's just my imagination!" I told myself, while slapping my head.
This guy was gonna haunt me. No matter what. I cried. My mother was not in the room to help. I couldn't call her name. I looked side to side, and saw my sister. She was dead. She died in a car crash a few years ago... I miss her. But I see her, in a form I don't want to see.
I fastly fall, but slowly back away. Her jaw dangled lower. You could see all her flesh. She disappeared and my mom rushed in. "Dear! Are you okay?" She asked.
I shook my head. "No! I saw..." I mummered.
My mom looked confused. "Saw what?" She asked.
"A man and..." I gulped. "Sis..." I slowly said.
"Her!? Wow, you are out of-" She said.
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I'm glad my sis is older. I don't need to babysit.
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on June 27, 2016
Ya I feel better now (I hate babysitting my 3 year old sis she's a total tomboy)
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on June 27, 2016
Glad to hear, @kori_minamato
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on June 27, 2016
Cool..... (I feel like I broke my leg)
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It's like a tying when it pokes u n u start bleeding and if u stand on 1 leg for so long u r leg won't move anymore (I accidently steeped on the extra sharp pencil)
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It's OK
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on June 27, 2016
Oh. Yeah. Sorry about that. ):
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