Lost At Sea

Sonic and Jackie are out on a vacation on a fancy yacht. Suddenly, a storm comes, and they're washed apart from each other. They both wake up, even farther away then before. They're both worried about each other, and want to find each other again. Will they be able to come back together, or will they drift even further apart?

published on May 15, 2016not completed

Chapter 2 - Sonic's POV

My eyes scanned the deep blue sea. No sights of Jackie anywhere. "JACKIE!!!!"
No response.
I then started trying to keep myself afloat. I remembered that I couldn't swim.
I then quickly, dog paddled to a nearby lifeboat.
I climbed on quickly and grabbed one of the paddles.
I paddled around.
I looked for Jackie. Still no signs.
I sighed and paddled.
I had to look for land.
I then saw a boat.
I waved my hands in the air and started yelling. "HEY!!! OVER HERE!!!! THERE ARE PEOPLE HERE!!!!"
I saw lights coming from the boat. They didn't see me.
I yelled louder. "OVER HERE!!!!"
The boat just passed me. They didn't see me.
I then looked around. I saw strange grey fins sticking out of the water.
Sharks.
I gulped.
One shark bit the lifeboat.
I started sinking.
I jumped out of the boat, and saw the fins coming after me.
I swam as fast as I can.
After a long while, I finally stopped.
The sharks were gone.
The waves then started crashing against me.
I struggled to stay afloat.
My eyelids then felt heavy.
I felt myself sink into the cold blue waters.
I closed my eyes.
Everything then went black.
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Here you go! Chapter 2, created by @BonnieBunny! :D
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sonackie is a great couple
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on June 08, 2016
YOu forgot to put the person who wrote this chapter XD damnit!
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Maria here. Ur kidding me arent u.... I was halfway through writing a sonic POV chapter and we get a notification saying we haven't put the name..... Wow...... I'm heartbroken
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Omg Are we all in the same account? XD Miichan here
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on May 15, 2016
It wasnt to you, Maria. It was to whoever wrote the 2nd chapter
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on May 15, 2016
Its OK xx
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on May 15, 2016
I just did lmao
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on May 15, 2016
Whoever wrote that first chapter...

1) Awesome job!
2) Please put your username so we know who writes which chapter.
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Alright, I just did. :)
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on May 15, 2016
Ohai Sayaka!!!
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