The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

One of the few to remain a Mobian, discover Jackie's side of the story before the event began, how she founded the Dauntless Mobians, and her life being the leader in a world where most people are now robots.

published on February 19, 2015not completed

Chapter 3: The Dawn of Dauntless

After successfully retrieving a few Mobians, we return back to our hideout. This time, we don't jump down a net. We fitted in a special door, for a Leader's Entrance, which leads down a spiral staircase made of metal.
As we reach the door, we hear a voice, which I recognised all too well. "Resisted, have we, Jackie?"
I turn to Kyle. "Get them inside, quick," I tell him. "I'll hold off Eggman."
He nods, and escorts the others inside through the door.
"I should have known you somehow resisted," Eggman says.
"Well, when you're married to the fastest hedgehog alive," I reply, "you gain all sorts of advantages."
"I'll be the one to put an end to that." He steps aside, allowing for two robots to step forward. It's the two robots from earlier.
And now that I can see them closer, it breaks my heart.
Sapphire and Leat are those robots.
"How does it feel knowing you're about to face your friends?" He's taunting me now.
I will not lie; it makes me want to drop to my knees and cry. But doing that would mean giving up, which I never will.
Pushing my tears aside, I clench my hands into fists. I'd hate to fight my friends, but I know I have to.
"Oh you won't be fighting them now," Eggman says. "But only if you join me."
"NEVER!" I shout.
"Wait till next time, Jackie the Hedgehog," he replies. "You WILL submit to me soon." He flies off in his craft, followed by Sapphire and Leat.
I just want to cry. But I can't.

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Lilac agreed to be an assistant to us leaders. I showed her the apartment she's staying in, and she was thrilled.
With all the Mobians we found looking around, Italy, Sky, LuLu, Kyle and I sit together in the Head Leader's apartment.
"We still need a name for our group," Sky says.
"What about something to do with bravery?" Italy suggests.
"We are pretty brave," Kyle adds. "Any suggestions, Jackie?"
"I do know one word that means a few things,"
"What does the word mean?" LuLu asks.
"It means bravery, determination, strength, and fearlessness," I reply.
They all smile, and at the same time ask, "What's the word?"
"Dauntless."
The other four nod, placing their hands together in the middle, as if they agree.
And as Head Leader, I place my hand on top, as if to say I have delivered the final verdict.
"Time to tell them, then."

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With all the Mobians gathered in the cafeteria, we step in to tell them the news, through my voice. I step forward to speak.
And trust me, I'm never a shy person. If I wanna speak to a large crowd, then I'll do just that.
"Fellow Mobians," I begin, "we are among a time where victory is most likely in Eggman's reach. We are few of the rare Mobians who remain, and we need to take matters into our own hands. The other leaders and I have discussed what action to take. For now, we've decided on monitoring the city for remaining Mobians. This hideout is now a shelter to them, as it is to us. But anyone who chooses to join forces with us, you will be choosing a path of bravery, determination, strength, and fearlessness. In other words, all the traits, and meanings, of our newly-named group. From this moment forward, let it be known that we shall be referred to as the Dauntless Mobians!"
Fists are raised into the air as our new group name is chanted. "Dauntless! Dauntless!"
I smile. With help from my friends, I have started a new revolution.
A rebellion.
A spark of hope.
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on October 25, 2015
Pft, such a Kyle thing to say XD Anyway waiting for this shit to get real now #Can'tWait.
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on October 24, 2015
XD im rooting for Joria because I'm on her said but Javkie...but Joria..but Jackie...Ah! GO JACKIEEEEE X3
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on October 24, 2015
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I was like magic!! (magic is good :))
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on October 27, 2015
Just read it.
It was awesome!!!
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on October 25, 2015
I READ IT
HOLY NUTS
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on October 24, 2015
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on October 24, 2015
HHOOOOOOLLLLLLLUYYYYYYYYYYY
SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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on October 23, 2015
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YAY!!!!
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on October 24, 2015
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
YESSSSSS!
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Tell ya, if you did some badass fights in here too, with like the Robots vs Some of us, that'd be cool shit. @sapphirethehedgehog Best look out though XD
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on October 23, 2015
Yeah!!! :3
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Amazing!!! Please write more.
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on October 23, 2015
awesome story!!!
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on July 19, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 25, 2015
OMG
OMG HOLY SHIT
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on June 23, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 22, 2015
Sapphire: I'm a robot?! D: noooooooo!
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on June 21, 2015
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*fangirl screams* YES YES YES!!!!!!
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on June 23, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
WRITE MOREEEE JACKIE MORE
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on June 21, 2015
This story is great!
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Thank you!
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on June 03, 2015
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on June 03, 2015
AWESOMELY EPICALLY KEWL
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Thank you!
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on April 01, 2015
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on March 07, 2015
Awesome nice idea of the new anti thing could be tense XD <3
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome!
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Welcome to Dauntless, Swift!
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Yeah, I like it
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on March 06, 2015
Btw you seen my new pic?
Ik it's rubbish, but look at it for me? I could use feedback.
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on March 06, 2015
Yeah! XD
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
IT WAS CELINA! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!
And thanks for using my idea! :D
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Np! Glad you liked it!
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
its divergent style XD
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XD I LOVE DIVERGENT
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on March 05, 2015
XD Yeah, ik it's got a little Divergent in there,
but remember that I made the Sonic-Divergent cross-over, so... yeah.
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on March 07, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
IS THE ROBOT CELINA OMG OMG I WANNA KNOWWWW
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on March 02, 2015
Awesome!
Lilanna: *turns head this way*
*presses button that closes FNAF-style door, separating Lilanna and us*
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on February 27, 2015
Dun dun dun Sonic ye douche don't hurt a girl like that u mean man thing XD
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Weren't his fault. He was a robot XD
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Yeah well still
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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Demn..this is a great story! Too bad it's too late for oc's..alwrll! Still I love it!
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Well ignore what I just said I will see ^.^ thanks Jackie
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on February 25, 2015
Who the hell said it was too late?
All you need is to make an OC on LilyIcicle's page for the main story, I'll look at it, and see where I can fit you in.
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 25, 2015
Pfttttt bring it! :D
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on February 23, 2015
pft no
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
PLOT TWIST!!!!
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IK!
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Awesome! If ya need any help, just ask. I'm here to help :)
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on February 21, 2015
Trying to work on it now
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on February 21, 2015
When ya gonna write the next chap? x3
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on February 21, 2015
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on February 21, 2015
ITZ SWIFT HEHH
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on February 20, 2015
Awesome!
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Thanks!
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
Well swift time to die Kyle's ganna come bite chu:D
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SWIFT IS A MOBIAN, YOU IDIOT!
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Wait are dumb they speak the same language
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on February 20, 2015
It should be Danish!
Wait lemme check
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on February 20, 2015
Yeah I put it in google translate and it said it was no in Sweden -_-
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
What!? I googled that -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Actually, it's Danish.
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on February 20, 2015
Don't chu go Sweden on meh -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Still ganna do it XD
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on February 20, 2015
-_- This ain't a zombie apocalypse
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on February 20, 2015
I knew that <.< >.> still ganna bite them :D
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