The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

One of the few to remain a Mobian, discover Jackie's side of the story before the event began, how she founded the Dauntless Mobians, and her life being the leader in a world where most people are now robots.

published on February 19, 2015not completed

Chapter 1: Eggbutt's gone too far!

I have been waiting a few hours for Sonic to return home from wrecking Eggman's plot. The kiss we shared still lies in my mind, that I sometimes drift back to that moment. I wish I could have savoured more of the kiss while I still could.
I feel the ground starting to shake. Like others, I run outside my house to see what is happening. Masses of strong waves are flying across the sky. So strong, it's almost impossible to resist it. A wave approaches me, and I counter-attack with a wave of my wind. It takes a lot of force, that it tries to push me backwards.
I try to plant my feet into the ground, so that I stay on one spot. I close my eyes and focus only on the wave approaching me, and my wave tackling it backwards. It causes a huge blow, that I am knocked to the floor, and my vision turns black.

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"WHo iS She?"
"CaN We jUSt fOCus ON reTUrnINg hER to THe mASteR'S laIR?"
I wake up to two robots looking down at me. Wait, robots? That's not right. What's going on?
"Who are you?" I ask.
"THat IS noNE of YOur BUsiNEss, PAthETic MObiAN," the first robot says.
"OUr oRDerS Are TO taKE yoU To oUR maSTer," the second robots says. "HE wiLL deAL wiTH yoU The WAy hE WanTS to."
"Master? What? Who?"
But they do not reply. They try to grab my arms, so they may haul me away. I quickly roll away from them and sprint as fast as I can. I may not be as fast as Sonic, but I have to try and get away.
Not to mention get to the bottom of whatever is happening.

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As I see a roof approaching, I hold my nerve. If I want to reach safety, I have to jump onto that roof, off this train.
I look behind, and see that the robots had followed me.
I growl. "Don't think about following me because you won't win!" I shout at them.
"OH, my DEar, I BelIEve WE wiLL," the first robot replies, and tries to fire at me.
Without hesitation, I jump onto the roof, landing feet first, with a few stumbles in my steps.
"GIve YOurSElf UP," the second robot tells me.
"COme WIth US, seRVe fOR loRD egGMan, ANd lIVe fOR loNGer," the first robot adds.
I look down the edge of the roof, and see a hole in the ground. An idea hatches in my head.
"I'd rather die than serve that Eggbutt!" I shout.
But was I really prepared to plunge myself towards death?
At least I wouldn't see this world.
I fall backward off the roof, plummeting to my death.
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on October 25, 2015
Pft, such a Kyle thing to say XD Anyway waiting for this shit to get real now #Can'tWait.
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on October 24, 2015
XD im rooting for Joria because I'm on her said but Javkie...but Joria..but Jackie...Ah! GO JACKIEEEEE X3
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on October 24, 2015
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I was like magic!! (magic is good :))
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on October 27, 2015
Just read it.
It was awesome!!!
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on October 25, 2015
I READ IT
HOLY NUTS
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on October 24, 2015
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on October 24, 2015
HHOOOOOOLLLLLLLUYYYYYYYYYYY
SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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on October 23, 2015
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YAY!!!!
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on October 24, 2015
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
YESSSSSS!
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Tell ya, if you did some badass fights in here too, with like the Robots vs Some of us, that'd be cool shit. @sapphirethehedgehog Best look out though XD
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on October 23, 2015
Yeah!!! :3
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Amazing!!! Please write more.
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on October 23, 2015
awesome story!!!
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on July 19, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 25, 2015
OMG
OMG HOLY SHIT
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on June 23, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 22, 2015
Sapphire: I'm a robot?! D: noooooooo!
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on June 21, 2015
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*fangirl screams* YES YES YES!!!!!!
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on June 23, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
WRITE MOREEEE JACKIE MORE
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on June 21, 2015
This story is great!
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Thank you!
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on June 03, 2015
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on June 03, 2015
AWESOMELY EPICALLY KEWL
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Thank you!
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on April 01, 2015
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on March 07, 2015
Awesome nice idea of the new anti thing could be tense XD <3
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome!
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Welcome to Dauntless, Swift!
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Yeah, I like it
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on March 06, 2015
Btw you seen my new pic?
Ik it's rubbish, but look at it for me? I could use feedback.
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on March 06, 2015
Yeah! XD
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
IT WAS CELINA! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!
And thanks for using my idea! :D
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Np! Glad you liked it!
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
its divergent style XD
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XD I LOVE DIVERGENT
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on March 05, 2015
XD Yeah, ik it's got a little Divergent in there,
but remember that I made the Sonic-Divergent cross-over, so... yeah.
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on March 07, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
IS THE ROBOT CELINA OMG OMG I WANNA KNOWWWW
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on March 02, 2015
Awesome!
Lilanna: *turns head this way*
*presses button that closes FNAF-style door, separating Lilanna and us*
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on February 27, 2015
Dun dun dun Sonic ye douche don't hurt a girl like that u mean man thing XD
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Weren't his fault. He was a robot XD
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Yeah well still
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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Demn..this is a great story! Too bad it's too late for oc's..alwrll! Still I love it!
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Well ignore what I just said I will see ^.^ thanks Jackie
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on February 25, 2015
Who the hell said it was too late?
All you need is to make an OC on LilyIcicle's page for the main story, I'll look at it, and see where I can fit you in.
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 25, 2015
Pfttttt bring it! :D
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on February 23, 2015
pft no
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
PLOT TWIST!!!!
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IK!
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Awesome! If ya need any help, just ask. I'm here to help :)
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on February 21, 2015
Trying to work on it now
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on February 21, 2015
When ya gonna write the next chap? x3
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on February 21, 2015
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on February 21, 2015
ITZ SWIFT HEHH
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on February 20, 2015
Awesome!
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Thanks!
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
Well swift time to die Kyle's ganna come bite chu:D
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SWIFT IS A MOBIAN, YOU IDIOT!
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Wait are dumb they speak the same language
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on February 20, 2015
It should be Danish!
Wait lemme check
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on February 20, 2015
Yeah I put it in google translate and it said it was no in Sweden -_-
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
What!? I googled that -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Actually, it's Danish.
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on February 20, 2015
Don't chu go Sweden on meh -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Still ganna do it XD
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on February 20, 2015
-_- This ain't a zombie apocalypse
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on February 20, 2015
I knew that <.< >.> still ganna bite them :D
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