Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014not completed

Dominick Eyekon

Dominick Eyekon Dominick's P.O.V

(It will normally be Stephania's P.O.V but will occasionally change)

I slowly walk through the old corridor of my school, stares burn into me. Why are they all looking at me? I rub my tired eyes. I couldn't sleep a wink last night, nor the night before. My mind is flooded by memories that I had discarded years ago. I still remember the day I met her. I wish I saved her. I was stupid and thoughtless. She probably had reasons to kill me, I should of at least heard her out. Tears race into my eyes, begging to come out. I slam my eyes shut and shake my head. Clenching my fists. Why was I an IDIOT!? My chest tightens and my stomach ties in knot. I just want to hear her voice, just one more time. I open my eyes and stop in my tracks, gazing at the ceiling.

"D-dominick?" Comes a shaky voice. I look behind me and am greeted by my old teacher which I am  towering over. I'm pretty tall.
"What?" I ask coldly.
"Are you alright? I heard about Stephania," My eyes widen. The teacher looks thoughtfully at me. Then, I'm sprinting, far away from the teacher. Tears run down my face, spilling like ink.

I stop in the boy's bathroom. I walk over to the mirror. Clutching the sink below it. My dark brown hair that could easily be mistaken for black, is scrawny and my dark brown eyes are glassy and bloodshot. I can feel myself shaking. Normally, when I'm feeling like this, Stephania is there to comfort me and to make me laugh. This thought triggers the rain of tears. I splash the cool water from the tap over my face.

I'm evil! Why?! I don't like this, not one bit.
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Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014