Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014not completed

Questions Without Answers

So many thoughts cross my mind. So many questions I am yet to find the answers to.
Why do the Dark Angels want me?
How is Dominick handling my death?
Why do the rules matter so much? I mean seriously, no smiling?
Has anyone ever broken the rules?
Why is Eli a lord?
Why haven't I eaten something yet?
Okay, so the last one isn't as important, but I am getting hungry. At least I'm already dead so I can't die of starvation.
"Stephania?" I gaze up from where I'm sitting, looking carefully through the darkness and spotting the silhouette of Eli, with Tyler close behind.
"Yeah?" I ask, half asleep. It's been a long day, okay?!
"We thought you might be..." Please say hungry! Please say hungry! "Tired," I groan. "And hungry," Thank the lord. Wait, if you think about it, did I say, thank the Eli? Or...
"Yeah, I'm a bit hungry and a lot tired," I reply.
"Stand up and follow me," Eli orders. I nod, pushing myself off the cloud

The smell of chicken and roast wafts up my nose. I enjoy every scent, apart from the scent coming from the food scraps bin.
"Where are we?" I ask whilst inspecting the white walls and polished floors. Tables stand in the centre with chairs surrounding them. I see multiple 'angels' laughing, eating and drinking, water of course.
"Dining hall," Eli tells me. I nod.
"Tyler, over here!!" I cast my eyes to the boy from earlier, Damian, I think his name is.
"Coming!" Tyler shouts over the loud sound of chatter. He hurries of to the white table, lined with black, his wings folded up behind him.
"For mentors, Night Watchers and their clients," Eli adds. He's right, not everyone here has wings.
"But wasn't Damian taken off Night Watch?" I ask.
"Yeah but his dad's the chef so he gets to stay here, it was a car crash, they both died and came here at the same time,"
"Oh,"

Eli hands me a plate piled with chicken and roast vegetables, before getting one for himself.
"Where do I sit?" I ask.
"Follow me," I do just that. As we walk down to a table I feel stares hitting me like daggers. From what I can see, all the other clients look like stereotypical 'bad people', then, there's me, the little girl defying stereotypes.
"What did she do? Tear off her doll's head?" One of the other mentors asks with amusement in his voice. Everyone around him laughs this strange laugh.
"Drunken idiots," Eli mutters.
"How old is she, ten?"
"Sixteen," I murmur. I continue to follow Eli. We reach a table with another mentor an client sitting at the other end.
"Lord Pocheco," The other mentor, an adult man, greets as we sit.
"Lord Harrison," Eli says back.
"Who's your client?" The man asks.
"Stephania, you?"
"Mauve," I look at his client. It's a female adult. She has long brown, greasy hair and a tattoos down her neck.
"Stupid stereotypes, always coming true," I murmur.
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Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014