Obsesion

Obsesion

Elise was anti-social, nervous, and an emotional wreck. Ever since she could remember, she was like that. Until she met Sesa.

published on May 10, 2017completed

A New Elise

A New Elise Sesa walked into his penthouse, then froze where he stood.

The Sadness demon was sitting next to Elise, crying.
Romeo clenched his fists.
"Romeo, calm-"

He shot next to Akaru, taking her hand in his, causing her to look up at him and gasp.
"Romeo!" She says, quickly wiping her eyes and looking at him with all the adoration in the world.
"Juliet..." He says, cupping her cheek in his hand, feeling his hand crack at her coldness.

"Youre burning up..."
"Youre freezing..."

Elise backed away, next to Sesa.
"Are they.."
"Yes. Yes they are."

Romeo stared into the empty eye sockets of his beloved, touching them and closing his own.
"Romeo, that wont work. I gave them up to become a demoness." She says, suddenly gasping and pulling up his shirt.

"I..." he said, looking away shamefully. "I gave up my heart because... Because I didnt want to... I didnt want to..."
Juliet smiles, then kisses him gently.
"Silly boy. Dont you know I love you?"
"I do! I do, I just..." his eyes bled, supstituting for tears. "I didnt think Id ever see you again!"

Sesa held Elise closely, causing her to look at him and hitchher breath.
For as long as she had known him, she had NEVER seen him cry.

Juliet smiled sadly.
"Romeo, Im here now. Ive been looking for you for years. Now that we have each other again, we dont need to be here, bothering them." She says, looking dead at Elise and Sesa.

Romeo tenses.
"Does that mean...?"
She smiled, then kissed him again.
"It means I havent been angry at you." She says, embracing him. "Lets go home."

Romeo nods eagerly, all his anger and hate just...
Melting.
"Of course, il mio amore." He says, holding her closely and crying. He looks toward Sesa, smiling like a fool. "Thank you! Thank you both! Ill never forget this. Thank you so much!" as a white light filled her eyes and his missing heart, causing them to disapear forever.

Elise looks at Sesa.
"Sesa..." she says, getting his attention, "I, myself, want to... Tell you I love you. Without help." She says quietly yet boldly.

He smiles.
He genuinely smiles.

"Go ahead. Im all ears." He says, sitting her down and taking a seat next to her.
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Sesa has gone crazy!!
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Did anyone like it or was it bad?
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Yes it was amazing
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on May 15, 2017
IT WAS AMAZING I LOVE IT
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on May 15, 2017
okay! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 12, 2017
Heh. Actually, leta go to my page Stories. I meed a few ideas on what to write next.
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on May 12, 2017
No problem@xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 12, 2017
Thanks, @TylerWay
That means a lot.
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on May 12, 2017
Well then you have a lot of imagination.
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on May 12, 2017
Meh. Not really. Some of these stories Ive been wanting to write for years, others I come up with on the spot.
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on May 12, 2017
Okay then the first chapter. And do take a break if you need to. Writing fabulous stories must be exhausting.
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on May 12, 2017
You mean the first chapter. Ive been writing like a fool since a few weeks ago. Imma take a little break.
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on May 12, 2017
Yes do it! I shall be waiting until Monday to read it
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on May 12, 2017
Really? Ok. Ill start Monday.
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on May 12, 2017
But yes a pure romance story would be amazing
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on May 12, 2017
I always try to make a pure romance story, but in the end....I end up killing someone. DON'T LET THAT HAPPEN TO YOU!!!!
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on May 12, 2017
Bows*
(No death. Just romance)
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on May 12, 2017
Thank you sir!
(Purely romance...)
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on May 12, 2017
Thats the spirit!
Maybe next time Ill just do a purely romance story...
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on May 12, 2017
Oh well, at least they got to go killing together!
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on May 12, 2017
It is.
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on May 12, 2017
But that isn't the end of Obsesion?
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on May 12, 2017
Lolers
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on May 12, 2017
Will do sir!
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on May 12, 2017
You should. I mean, expect the unexpected from now on.
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on May 12, 2017
I thought Elise was going to kill Sesa, but instead he turned crazy. I didn't expect that.
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on May 12, 2017
It was great!
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on May 12, 2017
What's she on oml
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Insanity.
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on May 12, 2017
Damn, Elise has knocked Sesa out!
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on May 12, 2017
The basic gist of this story is that everyone has their demons.
Now, it all depends on one of two things:

You can reject them, and eventually become like them

Or

You can embrace them, and eventually fight them off.
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That's a good meaning @xXEmo_KingXx
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*goes to read*
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on May 12, 2017
Done with the next chapter
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on May 12, 2017
I think everyone has some. I have them too.
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on May 12, 2017
Ik. I have my own.
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on May 11, 2017
She's going full yandere
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Shes utterly insane
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on May 11, 2017
BEST PIC EVER!!!!!
@xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 11, 2017
lol. Thank you my good sir. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 11, 2017
Good luck!
Slaps back and hands cigar*
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on May 11, 2017
Yep, she wanted me to make her my Qwife. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 11, 2017
For now. Btw, are you engaged to Samantha?
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on May 11, 2017
Yep and that's a good thing
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on May 11, 2017
oh my gosh so depressing why? she was doing so well why?
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She's insane. People who are insane are usually detatched from reality, and they have... certain thpughts. I should know.

Im completely bonkers.
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i am too don't feel bad just look at my new poll and it explains it all in one question
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SHES TURNING INTO A YANDERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!
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^-^
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That face says it all. Peoples are gonna die. ^_^
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Im so glad so many people like my stories. ^-^
I try to make my stories speak out to those who have no voice, who want to speak but cant because all they can do is ehisper when they want to scream it as loud as they can. A lot of my work is actually inspired by music.
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on May 11, 2017
I love it! :0
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on May 11, 2017
plz write more u are really good and i rlly like this story
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on May 11, 2017
Heartwarming chapter!
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on May 11, 2017
Romulous=Romeo
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on May 11, 2017
Congratulations, sir. You have successfully created one of the most emo stories I've read. (Clap, clap, clap, clap)
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on May 11, 2017
AKARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Plus I finished my first chapter@xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 10, 2017
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on May 10, 2017
i rlly love this story plz keep writing more
i am obsessed with it plz continue
Elise is just like me with her demoness and secret crush on someone who she may never be with sad but amazing
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on May 10, 2017
*Screaming in the inside*
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She was in spiritual pain.
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O_o
O_o O_o
O_o O_o O_o
O_o O_o O_o O-o
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on May 10, 2017
-_-
-_- -_-
-_- -_- -_-
-_- -_- -_- -_-
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on May 10, 2017
XD I'm a sassy demon.
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on May 10, 2017
True, we demons need some lower lifeforms to rule over little pieces of land.
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on May 10, 2017
Vampirws rule too
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on May 10, 2017
As a pure blood demon I completely understand. XD
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on May 10, 2017
XD lol
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on May 10, 2017
True. We don't really express gentleness.
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on May 10, 2017
Yeaaaaaaah, demons arent known for their gentleness.
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on May 10, 2017
O_o poor Elise
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Poor Elise, she might go crazy now thanks to Sesa.
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Evil laugh*
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on May 10, 2017
Somebody is going to die....
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on May 10, 2017
Hehehe
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on May 10, 2017
You're right, it wasn't. Sesa and his nightmare
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on May 10, 2017
Nope. Hehehehe
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YAS! THAT"S A GOOD SIGN!!
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