Cant Escape

This is a Story that will have you looking around you in fright.(Highly recommended to read in the dark). Btw the hotel in this story is a real haunted hotel in L.A I don't know how many floors their are or if their is one haunted room sorry if im wrong.

published on July 16, 2015not completed

We cant escape

I just wanted to leave that place but I booked it for 2months and they cant let you leave until you finish it.

(To know more read Cant Escape 2)
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BTW where is can't escape 2
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I haven't made it yet with my busy stuff
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on October 09, 2015
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on July 17, 2015
I <3 it
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on July 17, 2015
f u im blocking you
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on July 16, 2015
f u read my age 11
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Age doesn't matter when someone writes a story
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on July 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2015
im 11 and I wrought this
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I just believe that if you want to be a good author then those tips will help, and I'm sorry if this comes out as offensive or rude.
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on July 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2015
And I don't need your pointers
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on July 16, 2015
first off I did full spell check on everything and there is going to be 4 more of theseX-(
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on July 16, 2015
It's okay, just need spelling check and put the story into more paragraphs. Each time a person talks, it should start a new paragraph.
But hey, it's your story, it's how you want it. I thought you'd like some pointers
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And as in spell check, I mean the different uses of words like you used "where" instead of "we're"
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on July 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2015