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Here you can see my songs. Btw do not steal my songs! Hope you enjoy! =^-^=

published on April 28, 2015not completed

doom...do you know someone like him?

such a hurtful guy
He’s full of sadness and gripes “Why”
His temperament is gravely low
Because in him, there’s no glow
His kindness is of such
He never gives out much
He’s greedy and so aloof
Cares not if any have a roof
He’d make a perfect telemarketer
Or even maybe, an old undertaker
He lies and says, “Oh yes, I care”
But in his eyes --a black cruel stare
He shares not of any humbleness
For he's much too compassion-less
He steals fun and joy from all
He hopes his closest friends do fall
He cares not if another's day is bright
He only sees life, as the dark of night
His blessings are but only a few
As he hates all that’s fun an new.
He never treads his feet to far
And squints from sunshine, or a star
His attitude is just dull and grim
Doom...Do you know someone like him?
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Oh, my god... that just gave me the chills, it was so good! I love the last one! Keep it up! It's so awesome! Submit into a magazine, it's so good!
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Thanks!
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on April 28, 2015
You inspired me to write my own poem :D
Here's the link to it: http://www.qfeast.com/story/AcgU13/Colors-1
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No problem :) :D
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