my songs (3)

Here you can see my songs. Btw do not steal my songs! Hope you enjoy! =^-^=

published on April 28, 2015not completed

a dark kiss

Amber eyes
chilling
Russet and copper tints
peer out of skin white as powder.
The look of a nocturnal being.
I lock my gaze on their piercing, empty stare.
They draw me in.
I am powerless to resist.
She
Ophelia
in crimson red corset,
lies motionless on a bare wood floor,
covered in dust.
She invites me to imbibe her sacred charms
Have I no free will?
I approach
Slowly
Steadily
Her icy visage warns me to turn back
But there is no turning back
I am inches above her
She commands in silence
Her dominion absolute
At last
I can no longer fight what is preordained

A dark, dark kiss
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Oh, my god... that just gave me the chills, it was so good! I love the last one! Keep it up! It's so awesome! Submit into a magazine, it's so good!
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Thanks!
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Awww
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on April 28, 2015
You inspired me to write my own poem :D
Here's the link to it: http://www.qfeast.com/story/AcgU13/Colors-1
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on April 28, 2015
:D
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on April 28, 2015
No problem :) :D
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