my songs (3)

Here you can see my songs. Btw do not steal my songs! Hope you enjoy! =^-^=

published on April 28, 2015not completed

twisted tranquility

The stroll in their Forest is eerie this eve
It is dark here as the trees block the sun
You came here for comfort and solitude
But life as you knew it, is done...

A damp fog rolls in and it is cold now
You can hear something move high in the trees
It is like they are trying to warn you
But you keep going, ignoring their plea's

In this search for peace and tranquility
You have this twisted thought in your head
That no matter how many steps you take
The walk in the darkness will lead you to death...

It was enchantment that lured you onto the path
Where the Forest looks peacefully content
But if you took a close look deep inside
They are here for your life at any expense

It is far too late to turn now and run
Evil lurks when you dared to proceed
And out of the darkness they begin to appear
And the fear takes you straight to your knees...

Imminent doom a transgression
Of all of your terror and hate
And all that you knew here is gone
Their bite will ensure you final fate...

The shadows of death are upon you
There is no way out cause you lied
You fell to the ground and you bled
In this Forest of death where you died...
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Oh, my god... that just gave me the chills, it was so good! I love the last one! Keep it up! It's so awesome! Submit into a magazine, it's so good!
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Thanks!
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on April 28, 2015
You inspired me to write my own poem :D
Here's the link to it: http://www.qfeast.com/story/AcgU13/Colors-1
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No problem :) :D
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