If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014completed

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This would be a happy ending, perfect place to stop the show,
For Percabeth was after all, at the best it'd ever go
But I'm sure the mortal families, battles, quests, have crossed your mind.
Just read on and see what the gods and the Titans have to find
For when you think the story's over, well, it mostly never is
There's not always 'happy endings', but for love there always is
This is what you mortal minds surely try to think
But this is not a story type that will make your heart sink
Just the kind that states what true love really tries to be
You want to know what its about, you'll have to read and see
Surely it will end up well, Percabeth will live
After all they are immortal, their lives they just cannot give
That is until a desperate Percy Jackson goes to hit the books
He finds something to change his life, and how the Titians are just crooks
Not only is it that he finds, but something gods should surely dread
Something that could help the Titans find all the gods as good as dead
Nothing's going good for them, the enemy attack is set
The secret club, Olympians, and Titan army, they all met
All of them devised a plan, the secret club had had the best
After all the rebels were the wisest out of all the rest
Their ideas and master plans would be quite hard to win against
Though, the club was solely three, against  the gods with little sense
Those who didn't know that what was going on now was a trap
They went along distraction's road and put Olympus in a wrap
The barrier, the force-field shield, the magic boarder, it was strong,
Thought to be the answer, as it held the palace very long,
Though they would learn the hard way that they were very wrong...
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The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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on July 04, 2015
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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U read it all?
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 16, 2014
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 22, 2014
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on June 21, 2014
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
I. Will. Die.
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FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
AMAZIN!!
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*gets tissues*
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lol good idea! :)
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
Enchilada boy!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014