If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014completed

Percabeth

-Percy-
   
   Back on Olympus, it felt wrong to have left Annabeth so abruptly, but I wanted to leave on a happy note before she tried to attack me.  Percabeth broke a long time ago, and there was nothing I could do to fix it.  I slumped into the corner and focused in on Annabeth again.  After a few hours of meaningless events, I fell asleep for the first time in two weeks.

   I was headed to Hermes's private 'messenger room'.  He said he wanted to show me something, but I was pretty sure it was a trap.  Whatever it was, it had to be more interesting than spying on Annabeth for three days.  I don't know what I would do without her.  Probably something stupid like drown in a pool of mustard.  It had only been three days since I saved her life, but it hurt like hell to be away for so long after seeing her again.  She was the only thing that kept me from going full out god-mode.  She was my Achilles heal, once again, but this time it was more metaphorical than literal.  Hades came in to the hallway I was in through an intersecting pathway, his face looking like the bearer of bad news.
   "Who died?"  I asked.  I was joking, but he wasn't.
   "Annabeth.  Come."  He answered gravely.  My heart jumped to my throat then sank to my stomach, then split in two and did both.  This couldn't have happened.  I only took my eyes off her for a few hours, and she got herself killed!  I was too sad for tears, and too angry to do anything but follow.  Hades was the only one that could transport to both the Underworld and Olympus, even though he technically wasn't an Olympian.  I put my hand on his arm and found myself at the gates to the Underworld, where they decide weather to put you in Elysium, Asphodel, Punishment, or Tartarus.  I knew in my heart that Annabeth would get into Elysium, the field for heroes to float around happily for all of eternity.  
   I saw Annabeth immediately and let go of Hades to run for her.  Even dead, she seemed so full of life.  Anger welled up in me, and I was glad there was no water in the Underworld, because if there was it would explode.  I knew if I tried to grab her, I would just go right through her and that would depress me even more.  I went up to her soul and whispered to her,
   "Don't get reincarnated, Wise Girl.  I have a plan."  Then I transported myself back to Olympus.
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The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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on July 04, 2015
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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U read it all?
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 16, 2014
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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on June 22, 2014
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on June 21, 2014
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
I. Will. Die.
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FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
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on June 19, 2014
AMAZIN!!
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*gets tissues*
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lol good idea! :)
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
Enchilada boy!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014