Falling For You

Falling For You

I shot up, realising I was in a metallic room. It was cold and I felt goosebump's appear on my arms, they were white as snow. It was a sickly white and as I tried to stand up, handcuffs were grabbing at my arms then I saw it, my arms were slit all over.

published on June 29, 2014not completed

Jeff's POV

Jeff's POV
I howl in laughter at how I finally got a victim. She was a fighter which was good, I guess. More disastrous traps for her!
'What next boss?' I ask him, politely of course. He's my boss and if I ever, I mean ever, make him feel small or anything he will through me in the chamber.
'I'm not sure, let me finish thinking.' he said and then his face lit up with excitement.
'Aha! I have it! Lets make water, dangerous waters. Make it swirl...and...and! Make there a plug at the bottom to keep her alive, if she can make it alive.' He roared in his victory of a new idea, I like him, I really do.

I press my crisp, cracked lips together as I start the trap from scratch working my way into a tsunami to take that precious oxygen away from her. She mouths something up to the cameras, how the hell did she find them!? I turn on the speakers and hear her scream, well a croaky tiresome squeal. 'Please whoever you are just let me out, I don't deserve this.' She croaks. Her voice seems so beautiful even when its so used. Wait.!? How could I say that about this pathetic git.

After saying that I feel this feeling I've never felt ever. Its a sad sinking feeling. Is this GUILT!?! No. No. No. It can't be! I hate her and that's final. I like doing this. I Like It.
I clench my fist so hard warm blood poor's out of where my fingertips have been seeping into. I will not like her.
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Please finish it and add something where she fights her shadows or something like she has to use refraction of light to get rid of them!
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on April 16, 2016
Thankyou x
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on July 01, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/page/cGwJVy/Editor-and-Revisor
This is a page one of my friends runs. I think you should enter some of these into it and have her give you her opinion. :D
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on June 30, 2014
I can't wait for more, it seems very interesting.
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on June 29, 2014
Oh you will soon lol, if u read the stat update when I finished the story u might get it x
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on June 29, 2014
Awesome! Though I don't understand it yet. Keep on writing!!!!!!!
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on June 29, 2014