a little girl named dawn was very greedy her mom was rich.dawn got anything she wanted one day a little doll with 9 fox tails and fox tails.the doll was damaged dawn threw it away. that night dawn had a nightmare where dead bodys were everywhere an the doll was in a pool of blood with a smile in its face. dawn woke up with a scream she ran down the stairs she heard her parents talking shit about her then she heard a small kids voice she looked at the maker of the voice it was the doll.¨they hate you don't they dawn¨dawn was surprised. the doll continued.¨your mom hated me as well she ripped me apart but i put myself together the pain was unbearable lets get revenge dawn¨. dawn picked the doll up and went to the kitchen to get a knife she looked at the knifes she settled on a butcher knife and snuck behind her mother and cut in her head blood sprayed on dawn and the doll smiled.¨lets be friends forever dawn¨. dawn dropped the doll and ran as fast as she could outside into the woods. the doll smiled see you in your dreams dawn
This is a really good story! But the lack of grammar is a bit distracting, so please use full grammar next time! Other than that this story was amazing! Good job! ?
But the lack of grammar is a bit distracting,
so please use full grammar next time!
Other than that this story was amazing!
Good job! ?