The Daughter of Poseidon-A New Beginning

The Daughter of Poseidon-A New Beginning

Jackie finds herself at Camp Half-blood. Find out what happens on her demi-god journey.

published on May 21, 2016not completed

I Take An Unwanted Swim

I Take An Unwanted Swim    After I made my bacon sacrifice, I sat down at the Hermes table. All of a sudden my feet started floating up. I started getting dragged  through the air. I went crashing into the lake. I tried to pull myself up but, the shoes pulled me to the bottom of the lake. I held my breath in till my lungs burst. I took a breath of water, but I didn't take in water. I could breath underwater! I mean I was mad at the second, but that's pretty cool. I decided to stay under for a little bit, for pay back. From under I saw the boys bent over the water. I rode a wave to the surface, then knocked them off their feet with a giant wave of water. When I hit the ground, I gave the brothers the death stare and walked away.

    Like a normal girl, I hid in a tree for a few hours. I heard a few people calling for me, but I decided not to answer. I was pretty mad. People told me how being outside of the barrier alone was a death wish, but I didn't care. I guess my brain was so mad it wouldn't care about things. Then I heard someone coming, so I climbed higher up. When I looked down I saw Chiron and a guy, about two years older than me. Chiron looked up "A tree? Of all places your hiding in a tree?" I felt embarrassed. I mean who wouldn't? The boy looked at me and said, "So this is my sister?"
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Good job. You should make book two. And make Jake and Leo date!
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Thanks I will TRY but it's a hard relation ship since they where almost related
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on May 26, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
5 stars
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on May 25, 2016
PLEASE MAKE BOOK TWO
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on May 24, 2016
..... The Jackie in this story is named after me :) I feel honoured
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okay thanks
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on May 21, 2016
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on May 21, 2016
I like it! But maybe we can change it a little, How about Sullivan?
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Nice :) I like that idea, let's give her that.
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on May 21, 2016
Any ideas for a last name? Don't use your own. And my brothers name is Percy he freaked out when he noticed
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I can't use my own last name anyway XD
But for a last name.... How about....
Sickles? Like the currency in Harry Potter.
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