Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

An unlucky return

An unlucky return During the party Sonic came close to me.
"So, how do you feel brother?"
"Uh? How did you call me?"
"Well, a big part of your DNA is mine, so it's like we are brothers no?"
"I...I think you're right...maybe..."
"Mh? Hey you're blushing"
"Th-that's not true!"
"Yes it is!"
"It's only because I have no brothers!"
Then Sonic laughed and I laughed with him. And then another guy was laughing,and that...wasn't good...
"Ohohoh...well...so this is where you were hiding R3D1K. Very nice."
All:- Eggman!
"Oh, do you still remember me? I'm moved. I was thinking I was forgotten. Now..."
"What do you want from me? You do not expect me to come back to you I hope."
"No, nothing like that. It was an error to create you. And now... I will destroy you!
Robots! Kill them all!"
Sonic:- Ok guys,time to scrap some ro...what?
What was approaching was not an army of robots, they looks like...me...
Eggman:- Ooh, I said robots, I meant Bios!
They were all like me, only they were grey and black...
"Eggman, what have you done?"
"Time for me to get my revenge for your betrayal!"
Then they attacked, they were fast, really fast. Like me. Damn, I could barely save myself."The others! I must save the others!"

Silver:- There are too many of them!
Amy:- Aaah!
Sonic:- Amy!Urgh!
Shadow:- Why these fakers are so strong...CHAOS CONTR-Aargh!

I...Must...Save...Them...

Knuckles:- Come on,there is enough for all of you!

They...are my family...
I gritted my teeth, something was happening to me, a strange energy was flowing into me
I won't let my family get hurt because of me! Rrrgh!
"EGGMAN!"
"Uh?What?"
"YOU WANT ME? SO GET ME! HERE I COME! RRRAAAAARGH!"
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Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
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Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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