Corpse Party - Tortured Souls [Read Description]

Corpse Party - Tortured Souls [Read Description]

[Be warned: What you are about to read may appear as just an ordinary Sonic story at first, but it contains a LOT of horror, blood, and gore, just like the original Corpse Party anime. Read at your own risk! With this in mind, it's probably best to make a DISCLAIMER: I do NOT own Corpse Party - Tortured Souls, okay? I don't. The anime itself belongs to its respective owners of GrisGris. Thank you for reading this, and enjoy the story!]

published on March 01, 2015not completed

Multiple Separation [Part 3 - "I'm all alone with Jackie!"]

The broken lights repeatedly flickered on and off in a rather old classroom. Trying to stand up, pain shot through Jackie's body, the source of the pain coming from her left ankle. "Must've sprained it..." she muttered to herself. Ignoring the pain, she stands up, only to see her best friend Swift lying unconscious on the floor. "Swift? Hey, Swift, wake up!" Limping over to Swift, Jackie sat down again, and shook Swift's body awake.
"What's wrong, Jackie? Is it lunch break already?"
"Don't what's wrong me, Swift," Jackie replied. "Don't you remember what happened? We fell through the FLOOR of our classroom! Right after that charm."
"Oh, yeah, that happened, huh..."
The two stood up, looking around. They knew they weren't in their own classroom anymore. Just like at Kisaragi Academy, it was raining outside. Lightning struck, soon followed by the roar of thunder. The lightning seemed to brighten the room for the time it struck, before disappearing.
"This place looks kinda creepy..." Swift said, to break the silence.
"Oi," Jackie replied. "You're not like our class rep, so don't say scary shit like that." She walked to a window, and with all her might, she attempted to pull it open. But it was no use. It wouldn't budge. "No use..."
Swift took out her mobile phone, but nothing she could get. "Our phones don't have signal either..."
"Still... why did we end up here?"
"Perhaps..." Swift began. "Perhaps we were kidnapped? And we got involved in some accident?" Jackie looked at Swift in confusion and shame. "Just kidding! Not like that'll ever happen!"
Suddenly, Jackie heard voices in her head. But Swift did not.
"Swift... Did you hear that?"
"Hear what? I didn't hear anything," Swift replied.
"Let' just find a way out of here."
As they both walked out into the hallway, it was only then that Swift noticed that in order for Jackie to walk, she had to limp.
"What's wrong with your leg, Jackie?"
"I think I sprained it when we fell," Jackie replied. "I can still walk though."
"We really should treat that, though." Swift smiles at her. "When we get a chance, we'll bandage it up."
"Okay."
Walking down the stairs, Jackie realises something. "Swift?"
"Yeah?"
"I think we're the only ones here."
"Are we?"
"By the looks of it, yes."
"We're alone..." Swift repeats. "Which means..."
"Huh?"
"I'm all alone with Jackie!" While she spoke, Swift grabbed hold of Jackie, clinging to her.
"Swift! What is with you?" Jackie asked her. "We've gotta get out of here!"
"Why the rush?" Swift replied. "I wanna stay here and spend more time with you. Just us two!"
"Ugh, Swift...."

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Whilst walking, the two came across a lot of corpses, but they were brave to ignore it, as they kept on walking, in search of an exit, or any possible way out. For a while, they found nothing, until they found a large area where the floor was mostly covered with shoes of children. Small children.
"Exit found!" Swift shouted. Anyone could tell there was excitement in her voice.
"These shoes are tiny..." Jackie said.
"They are, aren't they?"

(A/N: Leaving it on a cliffhanger! Sorry guys, but if you want the next part, you gotta LITERALLY beg me for it XD)
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....Pfhhhhhhh XD omg. I was taking it so seriously until the end part. Sapph needs the bathroom!
Sapphire: -3- shut up!
Me: heehee sowy! X3
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That's how the anime goes :P
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Who will be sachiko?
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You sure I can't be sachiko?•.•
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on May 02, 2015
Sachiko will just be her normal self.
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on April 15, 2015
omg~! Its awesome!
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WOO! Glad you love it!
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on April 15, 2015
Heyyyy....did you get the characters check thing from my zombie story? XD btw I'm holding back the feels right now, poor swift...?
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XD Yeah I did.
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Lol i don't mind :D
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Yayyyyyy :3 I happy now! This was great!
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WOOHOO!
This took me at least 3 hours, so it better be good!
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on April 13, 2015
I was watching a vid and then started reading this and the music got all intense and I was like "Whoa" but yeah great story so far Jackie keep this up <3<3
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O.O OMG THE SHOES! When Japenise people comit suicide they take off their shoes before doing so. (Ugh cant spell for my life!)
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on March 23, 2015
Get the next chap out or I'll do.....Something?
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on March 23, 2015
Beg! Beg! Beg! :p
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HURRAYYYYY
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Why not go for it!
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on March 02, 2015
Yusssss! :D that would be awesome
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That new chap tho..... It actually got tears in my eyes.....until we STARTED FALLING. Swift be like;
Swift: WHAT THE FLYING PEPPINOS?!?!
XD
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on March 02, 2015
I died right at the beginning and I am just done XD <3
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Yippir
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on March 01, 2015
Woooo!!!!!
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on March 01, 2015
Squeeeee! :D yay! I loved it!
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Glad you do! Yuka (you) will be in the next chapter!
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on March 01, 2015
Kyle you bring a bad name to me. But anyway awesome story can't wait for more XD <3
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I'm so glad you all like the first chapter! And so you guys know, the 2nd chapter is now halfway written!
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on March 01, 2015
Omg. CONTINUE.
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on March 01, 2015
Awesome! :D
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