The Red-Ribboned Killer

The Red-Ribboned Killer

Apparently, once I put in completed for my other story, I can't change it back so I can add another chapter. Hope you like it!(Picture almost has nothing to do with her appearance. She has long dark brown hair but kept in a ponytail with a red ribbon, a blue flowy shirt, jeans, and blue sneakers.)

published on September 02, 2014not completed

Jack's Adoption Part 1

I know I haven't updated in so long but that's why I'm updating! Hope you like this chapter! :D (P.S. Please don't blame me if I change things a little.....It's because this was based off of a RP with Matlen and KameoRose but I forgot the details so please don't blame me.)


Kayla: *sighs sadly*
Jane: Hey, what's wrong?
Kayla:I just miss my parents is all....

*everyone shoots a glare at Sonic.exe and Tail's Doll

Sonic. Exe and Tail's Doll: O.O What???

~Flashback~
Kayla: *talking with Sonic.exe* Will I ever see my parents?
Sonic.exe: Nah....It's not poss-
Crystal: *bonks him on the head and whispers* SHUT UP!!! *turns to Kayla* I'm sure you're see them...!
Tail's Doll: I don't think so....Not unless they're zombies-
Crystal: X( *bonks him in the head also* JUST SHUT THE [CENSORED] UP!!!
Kayla: So that means they'll only see just to eat my brains...?*looks sad*
~End of Flashback~


Sophie: You IDIOTS!!!!!
Sonic.exe and Tail's Doll: O.O WHAT???? We were just telling the truth...
Crystal: *looks like she'll kill them*
Kayla: Wait....I have a brother named Jack! He's currently in the orphanage right now...

Everyone: Okay! Let's go!
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I love how crystal says badwords!xD
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
When is the next chap
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Probably today or tomorrow...
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
Awsome!!
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Thank you!!! Did you finish you chapter on lets play hide the soul?
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on September 10, 2014
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on September 10, 2014
Awsome!also i made a chap of lets play hide the soul
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I read it! Loved it! :D
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Ok awsome!
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on September 09, 2014
You'll see!:D
(probably going to make the next one tomorrow or somewhere along there...)
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on September 09, 2014
When r u doing the next chap?
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Can't wait to read it!!!
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on September 09, 2014
Im making chap three and adding Stuff to the chap 2
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Im adding things right now
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Soooooooooo awsome!i ove it!write moré please!
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Thanks!:D
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
About the daddy thing,Looks like the song of miku this is the link to understand https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EuoePPdKGnY
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Whoa...
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014