The Red-Ribboned Killer

The Red-Ribboned Killer

Apparently, once I put in completed for my other story, I can't change it back so I can add another chapter. Hope you like it!(Picture almost has nothing to do with her appearance. She has long dark brown hair but kept in a ponytail with a red ribbon, a blue flowy shirt, jeans, and blue sneakers.)

published on September 02, 2014not completed

Two Fights in a Row

All of us went to the mansion.
Me: (I guess we're early...Might as well wait and read my book! :p)
Zalgo: It's starting to get boring...
Me: YOU? The ruler of chaos gets BORED???
Zalgo: You should know that there is almost NOTHING to do in my palace...
Me: -_-' (What do you even DO I wonder...)
Zalgo: Hey, at least THANK me that I'm here.
Me: But you said you had nothing to do...
BEN: (Burn....)
Zalgo: Shut up!
*finally, the two arrive*
???: Show yourself!
???: ...
Me: (Ehhh...I have it all planned out...Hopefully this will teach you not to think you're all high and mighty!) *comes out of the darkness* Well...I wasn't really BLUFFING! Hehehe!
???: (Hot dang it!) *groans*
Me: Honestly, you should just kill another person. (I'm already winning this, so you probably should...)
???: Oh give me a break! I was hungry, I have done this for years, I wanted to kill something, give me a break!
???: You're just a little brat who always hangs around Slender...
WHAT? OH NO SHE DIDN'T! Fine!!! Instead of dropping them somewhere nice and safe, I'll drop them in the city's dump where they belong!!!
Me: Try killing someone else! (Cocky brats!!!)
???: *paces in front of us* How about we make a deal?
Me: Tough beans! :p *presses a button that she was hiding behind her back and a trapdoor sends them to the city's dump* Hope I never see you again!
After that, everyone sighed.
BEN: Man, that girl had a high horse...
Zalgo: She sure had a much higher horse than ME...
Me: *sighs again and goes back to the woods*
Slendy: *gets my arm before I could leave* Hey, just to remind you- *whispers* You are always special to me...
Me: *gets surprised but then narrows her eyes in a comforted way* Thank you...
Slendy: *smiles* Always glad to make you happy.
Me: *hugs him*
~A few days afterwards, like probably in the afternoon or so~
Me: *goes into Kayla's room* Kayla?
Kayla: Yeah?
Me: Jeff DID put gum on the lock, right?
Kayla: Huh? *realizes what she's talking about* Oh...nope....
Me: 0.0 Then who is it???
Kayla: I don't know for now...
Me: *gets an uneasy feeling all of a sudden* Say...Do ever feel like you're being watched?
Kayla: Everyday. But look!!!*points towards the window* Jeff!!! There's a weird stalker on the window!
Jeff: *goes into her room* Weird stalker?
???: *transports in front of them* Weirdo? Aren't you the type of girl that judges a girl in an instant...
Me: (Who is she? I feel like I've seen her before...)
Kayla: *pulls out that person's doll* Tell us who you are or I will use this doll!
Me: *now remembers* Oh right! You're one of my attackers! I almost forgot about you!
Jeff: First off...WHY ARE YOU BEING A WEIRD STALKER???
???: Didn't you even hear me last time?! I said I came to make a deal!
Me: Ehhh...Didn't feel like it!
???: If you don't accept, I'll simply make you bend on your knees and say sorry. *smiles evilly*
Kayla: CREEPY!!! *stabs the doll with a pin, which makes the unknown person get hurt*
Me: You seriously think THAT will make me make a deal with you? First off, YOU TRIED TO KILL ME. Second, you're MEAN! I don't make deals with mean people!!!
???: Don't believe me? Fine! Just watch! *grips Kayla's neck and throws her at me*
Me: *holds her* Kayla! Are you okay?! *realizes she now has the doll* Seriously? Jeff, SLICE THE DOLL!
Jeff: With pleasure! *smiles evilly while he slices the doll's arms and legs off*
???: *plops to the ground but then gets picked up by somone* Huh?
Me: (E.J?) E.J, take this girl to your room. She already caused enough drama for today...
Kayla: *whispers* Her name is Crystal...
Me: Hmph....
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I love how crystal says badwords!xD
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
When is the next chap
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Probably today or tomorrow...
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
Awsome!!
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Thank you!!! Did you finish you chapter on lets play hide the soul?
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on September 10, 2014
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on September 10, 2014
Awsome!also i made a chap of lets play hide the soul
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I read it! Loved it! :D
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Ok awsome!
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on September 09, 2014
You'll see!:D
(probably going to make the next one tomorrow or somewhere along there...)
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on September 09, 2014
When r u doing the next chap?
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Can't wait to read it!!!
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on September 09, 2014
Im making chap three and adding Stuff to the chap 2
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Im adding things right now
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on September 09, 2014
Soooooooooo awsome!i ove it!write moré please!
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Thanks!:D
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
About the daddy thing,Looks like the song of miku this is the link to understand https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EuoePPdKGnY
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Whoa...
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on September 04, 2014