Willow the fallen angel

Willow is an angel her wings are broken she had fallen to the ground from the heavens, and in our first chapter we see her life when she was in the sky haven we call heaven

published on August 05, 2016not completed

A Flying Angels Castle

The sunlight peeked in from willows window as she slept on a bed of clouds with a silk sheet her eyes were droopy and she couldn't see very well she blinked twice and her vision was less blurry  she lifted up the silk blanket covering her body she got up and spreaded out her dove like wings she got out of her bed and went to her dresser she got dressed in a light purple dress with silver and periwinkle lining then she started to brush her white hair it was short and she stopped quickly she heard a knock on the door she tightened her dress and then tied the bow on the back then walked to the door she opened it up and saw some dark angels she tried to scream but they covered her mouth they carried her out and went to the edge of the cloud they said "we will end the rain of light angels and the first one we kill is you" they put her on the edge of the cloud and pushed her off she started to scream and fly up but she had already got to the trees her wings ran into them and they were hurt she got to the ground some soft moss broke her fall but it still hurt she got up and ran to the side of a tree she was crying because of her broken wings she didn't know what to do she could not fly back up and she could not see anyone around her who could help but then she heard a rustling in the bushes and a boy jumped out he had brown hair and was wearing broken jeans and a black tee shirt with holes and mud all over it a hunting dog followed him he was holding a notebook he sat down and started drawing she stopped crying and folded up her wings she walked out from behind him and poked his shoulder she spread out her wings and he looked at her he jumped up and yelped she tilted her head "hey do you have any flying pets I could ride on to get up to heaven?" she smiled but he was stunned she poked him on the cheek and he said "ARE YOU MENTAL!?" in a squeaky voice then he backed away


TO BE CONTINUED.. Please comment and rate this if you liked it because if you did I'll make more
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It's my first time making a story like this sorry if it's bad if you want more then be sure to comment also tell me anything to improve my story making<3&[]
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Hm, I like the descriptive words! Maybe add a bit more punctuation though, if you want to improve. That's really all I can point out. Nice job!
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