monster i have become

monster i have become

maka is 15 she is nice and kind but when she gets depressed some one comes to get her and wants to take her to insanity but she does not want to...

published on December 25, 2015completed

the transformation

the transformation         "wait wha!" maka said not being able to finish the word what. asami used her magic to transform maka into a evil person.  
        "now your just like me!" asami said.
        "so whats your evil power?" asami asked hoping it was fire. but it was the opposite of fire.
        "ice! cool i love ice!" maka said not feeling or looking evil at all.
        "wait no it had to work, let me try again!" asami blasted her with magic once again.
        "umm i still have ice!" maka said wondering why.
        "wait no,it cant be!!" asami siad.
        "cant be what!" maka asked.
        "maybe they just ok since maybe,no, I DON'T KNOW!" asami told maka.
        "maybe your thing did work the first time,that's why its not working again! and maybe you just need to change my power!"
        "great! how do you do that then?" asami asked.
        "i don't know! i'm not magic well i am now but you know YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!"
        "but i don't either! ok give me a few minutes and i can find it out!"
        "ok then". maka sat down not knowing she could escape right then. a few minutes later asami said
        "ok i got it!"
        "then show me!" maka demanded.
        "ok i will try!"
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Its Great Adriana
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on July 15, 2017
thanks :D
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on December 26, 2015
OOOOOH I <3 it !
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its very interesting!
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