carly the killer the new creepypasta

A girl who thought she wasnt going to die...but she did or did she read the story to find out.

published on February 18, 2015not completed

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The day jeffery woods got burned andalmost died ,carly wasnt there to help him.she ask everyone "wheres jeffery,wheres jeffery,isnt he here" she said and the rwplied "he isnt here anymore" though they knew he was burned alive and she finnally found out so she went to the hospital."j-jeffery" she said.Jeffery wasnt awake so she left -months later- carly hasnt heard from jeffery since ,the news said there was a killer out and they had one witness they said the killers name was jeff the killer.Carly gasped how could he do such a thing -later that night- carly awoke that night to see the window open "didnt i close that window" she said to herself not knowing what would happen.....
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MARY-SUE ALERT!!!
RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!
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on January 28, 2017
wicked
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Very good.
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
Cool OC,Realistic story good outfit ^.^:p
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Thanks but the oc is now a cp ^^ and thanks
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on February 19, 2015
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on February 19, 2015
Love the story! Please dont tell your a fangirl of my favorite creepypasta Jeff...
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Thanks it took forever to write ^^ im going to be making stories and quizzes...any ideas or requests
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Creepypasta is a good idea too
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on February 18, 2015
Good idea or just on creepypasta in general lol
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on February 18, 2015
Your welcome, and awesome! And for a good quiz idea is mostly Sonic...alot of people love it including myself...
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on February 18, 2015
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on February 18, 2015
Nope not at all i wanted to be a creepypasta and i only love jeff as a friend not fangirly like and thanks it took forever :D
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Your story was so amazing! Im adding it to my favorites on qfeast
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on February 18, 2015
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on February 18, 2015