The Visitors

A teenage girl suddenly developes the ability to see, and talk to ghosts. She learns she has several ghosts living in her house. This is part of an ongoing series to continue for a while.

published on July 07, 2015not completed

Life with "guests"

   After a nighf of almost no sleep I wake up, and it's time for school. I open the closet door to get some clothes. "Ah"! I scream. Dan was right there. He was standing against the wall...asleep. He's a ghost so I figured I could reach through him, but no I can't. I pushed him outbow the way, but he fell down in front of the closet. I grabbed my clothes, and went to the bathroom.
   I went back in my room to get my shoes, and Dan was laying on them. I went ti lift him up, and with my luck he woke up.He suddenly shouted "Whoa, what are you doing? This isn't legal". I admit it may have looked like I was doing something bad, but I really wasn't.  I replied "Sorry, I was getting my shoes". He didn't say anything. It was pretty embarassing.
   I wonder if I've ever done anything like that before. Of course I couldn't see,  or touch ghosts, but I may have made them uncomfortable. The bus just arrived so I put my shoes on, and left. I noticed the female ghost from last night looking at me strangely. I arrived at school, and walked with my friend Jenn.
    I had a serious question for her. "Hey, jenn... Do you believe in ghosts?" Jenn replied "Yes, of course sometimes at night I hear creepy noises. It's ghosts of course. I'm not scared of them. Every since I was little I've always wanted meet a handaome ghost. It'll happen". I was't surprised by her answer. Jenn is always bright, lively, and full of weird ideas, and fantasies.
   "Oh, thats nice". I replied. I was lost in thought for some reason Dan came to my mind. There's so much I want to ask him, but after this morning I'm to embarrased to talk to him. I could ask the pioneer woman ghost, but I she seens so stern, and I hacen't actually talked to her yet. Who should I ask?
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Nice. I love the plot. I hate to be that one girl, but there are a few grammar errors. Other than that, 10/10.
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on September 10, 2015
Love your story
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on July 08, 2015
Looking good!
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on July 07, 2015
Wow! Ur an AWESOME writer!
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