Clouded

Name: Shadow
Age: Young adult she-wolf
Rank: Lone wolf
Back story:
Shadow has lost her pack to another vicious pack of wolves. She is the only survivor. In fact, she is very wary around other wolves but gets along well with foxes. Her best friend is a silver fox named Marko. See More
Power: Can use the shadows to disappear and appear anywhere that she has been previously.
Color: Black with white socks, her eyes are lavender
Extra: She has scars from the attack

Name: Skorlün
Age: Adult Wolf
Their distinguished achievement that made them Alpha: Reunited a broken pack, and recruited some oddities.
BackStory:
Skorlün was raised by an Omega, and a Rogue packmember of the Bramble Leaf Pack. His Mother, the Rogue had killed her own pack members while defending her den. She was of a near midnight black pelt, with razor sharp See More claws, and blue eyes. His Father was the Omega, raised from birth as a scapegoat for the clan, due to a deformation on his tail. Raised outside of a clan, Skorlün was a loner. He had learned also though that friendship was a bigger ally than the life of a loner from that of the Fox clans. He retraced his Father's steps back to his clan, where he fought both broken side's Beta, and won his way to Alpha of both packs.
Appearance:
He is a moonlight silver pelted wolf, of slim nature. His eyes are purple. His tail is twisted like his Father's, but not as much, while he has battle scars that have yet to fully heal adorning his eye and shoulder.

Hope you liked the last chapter I try to work on it as much as I can but I don't really have time anyway if you're here pleas please please go read Enchanted by the night it really good I promise!!! And it's the first time I wrote a story From readers view (I don't know what I'm saying lel)

Hoi~ to all those reading this, I just want to say thank you for all the to forms and that sorry I haven't uploaded a chapter to this book

My oc Misty has had black magic as a power since I joined Qfeast Months ago....But it's okay Misty can be around before Cloud was So it doesn't bother me much...When Misty dies, she gives her power to someone else..

Name: Indigo
Age: Adolescent fox
Rank: Explorer/medic
Backstory: Her dad, Forest, ate poisonous berries and went insane. He killed Indigo's mom, Moon. Forest then abandoned Indigo. However, Indigo got struck by lightning and developed the power to knock somebody out just by aiming a paw at them.
Power: Can knock someone out by pointing at them with a paw See More
Color: Deep indigo, with streaks of purple and navy blue (this was caused by the lightning strike). A white star symbol is in between her eyes, which are emerald green.
Extra details: She's strong, clever, and passionate, but she also can be mean sometimes.

I love the story so far! I can really picture it in my mind. You do a great job describing things! :)

An Alpha form..?

Name:
Age:
Their distinguished achievement that made them Alpha:
BackStory: See More
Appearance:
Pack(s) Leading:
Extras:
Family(?):

Also I need more characters it's hard making them up on my own :'(

Btw if you don't like what I have done so far with your characters then please tell me and I'll change it :)

Name: Tilan
Age: Young Adult Fox
Rank: Sapper (Trap maker and such)
Backstory: Born to a small family below an oak tree within the small Oak forest, he was first out of three children to be born. He grew up doing things he had seen many two-legged creatures doing, using a strange herb that was long and thin, but strong enough to lift himself with enough of the See More herb. He used sticks and other items to build small shelters and odd contraptions before he was sent out into the real world on his own.
Power: No supernatural powers, but he has learned he art of Two-legeed creature construction and trapping.
Color: His fur coat is similar to that of a normal Asian Red Fox, though with what seems to be a black fur mark on the right side of his face that forms a symetrical circular object with ridges in it.
Extras: He uses leaves to carry supplies he would not normally be able to carry, but this tactic makes him easier to track, and easier to catch.

How did I do?

E.g.
Name: Cloud (CloudedMoon)
Age : pup
Rank: none yet ( alpha m/f, medic, so on)
Back story: See More
Power:
Colour:
Extra details:

I just wanna say a big thanks to all you guys who commented on my story, it really boosts me to write more, and to know that someone is actually reading it, so I'm here to ask if you guys want o be in the story, if so then just type up a RP form for your animal, I'd suggest to go with a wolf or a fox

This looks good thus far.